I see a ship now from a far
I’ll like a version in a jar
Then my friends will surely see
What I saw there in 3 d
For sometimes we seem to look to straight
When we are looking for that perfect mate
There seems to be another side
That sometimes they do try to hide
But I guess it is just all the same
When we play this dating game
So who is right and who is wrong
While we’re dancing to that song
But surely now, the night will end
We leave that place, we met a friend
And if it is truly meant to be
You leave your number, just for me
I’ve been burnt back in the past
For that night I hoped would last
I remember just one thing
Married ones just want a fling
2007-02-24 23:30:26 · 10 answers · asked by gary_b04901 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
id give it an 8
2007-02-24 23:37:05 · answer #1 · answered by Hannah 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
6
2007-02-24 23:47:32 · answer #2 · answered by Triple H 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
7. You are saying a great deal in this poem. Seems as if your feelings or someone elses is deeply rooted in this poem. Good piece of work!!
2007-02-24 23:42:58 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
8*
2007-02-24 23:48:23 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I will give that an eight (8) i think that it is good.
2007-02-25 00:00:50 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good attempt.
2007-02-24 23:57:42 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
8 ..
2007-02-24 23:42:19 · answer #7 · answered by leann_hp28 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
10 because its all true and nicely written
2007-02-24 23:40:41 · answer #8 · answered by Stela 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ONE
2007-02-24 23:40:31 · answer #9 · answered by Nose 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
write more
2007-02-24 23:33:19 · answer #10 · answered by keral 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋