Would you buy my book?

Question

The story is for a boy (called Tom maybe) who is living with his uncle (Frank). One day the uncle decides to send Tom in an orphanage until he find a better job so tht they could keep the house. In the orphanage Tpm meets Ema and they find together a watch that brings them back in 1925. There they are almost crashed by Vlad who turns out to be the inventor of the time machine. The date is 14th of April, the famous day of king Boriss attack in the Arabackonack pass. vlad dies that day because he is the king's driver and now the two children must stop the atentat in the Saint Sofia church. Interested? Look at my question "Do you like my story?Part 2" to see my writing style. Would you buy the book if I manage to publish it?

For you "american idiot".
The story takes place in my country- Bulgaria. These facts and dates are real. I find that interesting...

Answer 1

Kids between the ages of 9-12 might read that. But I don't like the time-travelling object. Overused plot device.

Answer 2

im sorry... im an american idiot..... 1925 with king boriss? attack in the arabackonack pass? atentat? is this a fantasy world.... if it is, then time travel wouldnt go well with any story..... and tom and uncle frank... too commom a name.....

besides.. if the cover of the book and the back of the book is too far apart, then i cant read it...... i can only read three page books...

Answer 3

well no offense but its a little too
dramatic.but anyways its a nice story.I'm so sorry

Answer 4

maybe, if its not all historicalish and more fantasy. :)

Answer 5

maybe

Answer 6

no

Answer 7

yeh i dunno, it sunds good, but really stupid parts in it. sorry, i wuldnt buy it