honestly*
When you wonder the meaning of life and love
Know that I am with you,
Close your eyes and feel me kissing you
in the gentle breeze across your cheek.
WHen you begin to doubt that you shall ever see me again
Quiet your mind and hear me,
I am the whisper of the heavens
Speaking of your love.
Stars will glitter under the moonlight's song
And I shall remain silent and still
Waiting
Waves will dance under the wind's tune
And I shall remain unfeeling and calm
Waiting
Fires will fight under the sun's chorus
And I shall remain asleep and peaceful
Waiting
I will then hear and see
Feel and breath
And I shall become happy
In a state of everlasting sleep
I shall wait no more
2007-02-24 01:48:52 · 12 answers · asked by Gõlden angel 4 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I'm the editor of my school's literary magazine. If this had been submitted, it would have definitely been published. I really think this is true. This is really good. On a scale of 1 to 10, it would get a 9.9. The words flow together in such a way that readers are pulled in. I started wondering about life and love. Keep writing and good luck.
2007-02-24 02:26:20 · answer #1 · answered by joe19 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
4
2007-02-24 09:58:47 · answer #2 · answered by dellstar_mofas 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sssshhhhhhhhhhhh
i can hear ur hear beats floating through the fine breeze....
i can see ur smile shine from way soo far....
i can feel ur soul... the soul of an angel flout by my side....
i just cant explain how much i adore u =)
*mwaaaahh*
yeaahhh and as usual i'de give it a 10000000 thats accordin to my scale =P hehehe
missin u
2007-02-24 15:25:23 · answer #3 · answered by |nViNcIbLe 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Did you write a song lyrics?
Very good. 10 out of 10
2007-02-24 09:53:58 · answer #4 · answered by ♥♥♥Miracle♥♥♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
6 out of 10. And remember you asked.
2007-02-24 09:52:11 · answer #5 · answered by John Rambo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very good keep up the good work.
2007-02-24 09:54:19 · answer #6 · answered by CJ5fan 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good..wish i could do 1/2 as well.
2007-02-24 09:52:33 · answer #7 · answered by 2u 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Makes me want to jack-off.
2007-02-24 10:00:33 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice
2007-02-24 09:51:19 · answer #9 · answered by Btieti 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is great and the truth
2007-02-24 09:53:04 · answer #10 · answered by Bobby B 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋