Roses are red, Violets are blue, and for some reason I can't stop thinking about you. When I look to the sky I ask god why, I can't be your guy. I'm not depressed, I'm just blessed to have met someone like you. You are beautiful in every way, and I think about you night and day. I will always be there for you, through the good times and bad, and when I'm not with you it makes me sad. I know your love cannot be bought, but you have to admit I have given you a lot, JK. Will you ever call me again, I think about that everyday, and I just wanted to say, I love you.
2007-02-24 01:42:53 · 7 answers · asked by BAS 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I think it's very sweet and romantic, though I know some will say you're trying too hard [Go for it anyway ;) ]. I'd kill to have a guy say something like that about me!
2007-02-24 01:50:16 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Umm... It;s okaii but i think it could do with a bit of editing. It needs to not rhyme so much and be a bit more soulful.. You need to take out the joke part because it spoils it... other wise it's good.
2007-02-24 09:46:45 · answer #2 · answered by ♥..::Amy::..♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
truthfully, though it aint the typical lyrical nor the most romantic poem i've ever heard but what stands out is ur sincerity and ur personal touch.. she wil like it.! *good luck*
2007-02-24 09:48:02 · answer #3 · answered by fizadora 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's OK, but....I'm not excalty sure but there something...though....you may just want to tell her you like her. As in you tell her what your trying to say...
2007-02-25 00:12:00 · answer #4 · answered by Tinkerbell 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awwwwww that is so sweet i write poetry and yours is realy good i think she will love it! good luck!
2007-02-24 10:12:34 · answer #5 · answered by Crystal 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ummm... its ok, needs a bit of editing
2007-02-24 09:49:37 · answer #6 · answered by Btieti 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
she will love it ,good luck.
2007-02-24 09:48:36 · answer #7 · answered by prettyg 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋