How's this for the top of my head:
I know im not the smartest man. I know im not the most good looking man. But I do know that I am one lucky man because now I know I can spend the rest of my life with you. I tried to imagine living a life without you and I couldn't because you are the love of my life. You showed me the true meaning of love. I will always love you.
Please add more to this or write a better one.
2006-12-20 11:43:25 · 13 answers · asked by Chris J 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Weddings
a little self bashing right? I like most of what you have here, but go to traditional vows and reword them, I like when people write there own vows, but I hate it when they forget to pledge the fundamental things in marriage to each other, what about how you not only lover her, but will be faithful to ONLY her. not only will you love her, but you will love her NO MATTER WHAT...(remember for better for worse?) How you will work through what life throws at you and try to make all your actions be the best for her...youve got a good start, but keep going! Youve pledged your love, but what else are you gonna do for her? Marriage is about WAY more than just loving each other!
2006-12-22 02:54:29 · answer #1 · answered by ASH 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
How about using, I know I am the smartest man for asking you to marry me. When you said yes, that made me the luckiest man in the world. I can't imagine my life without you and I don't want to because your all I need to make my life complete.
Add that it's a musher. Congratulations and happy holidays
2006-12-20 12:19:07 · answer #2 · answered by Ms.Deb 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I am not the world's smartest man.
I'm not the world's richest man.
And I'm not the world's best looking man either.
But today, I am the world's luckiest man because you are standing here before me, ready to spend your life by my side.
I try to imagine my life without you but I can't. You are the love of my life, the center of my world, my one true love.
You have showed me what true love means, and in return, I promise to love you forever.
I love you for who you were, who you are, and who you will be.
I will grow old with you, and as we experience life together, I will always be by your side.
2006-12-20 14:25:16 · answer #3 · answered by Chrys 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I don't even know you and I teared up just reading it. You want other to add more or write a better one, but nothing can be better than you saying what's in your heart. I hope that your love will last forever and may your future be filled with love and happiness.
2006-12-20 11:47:44 · answer #4 · answered by Candi 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
From the moment I met you, I knew you were the one for me, you complete me. Your love is unmatched, it refreshes me everyday. Your presence reminds me of the fact that i'm the most priviledged man alive. Your touch is like an oceanic breeze rippling through every fiber of my being and causing me to love you even more than words could say.
That's all I can think of for now but what you've done so far is fantastic, it's from the heart and at the end of the day, that's all she wants, your heartfelt appreciation so try not to be too anxious.
2006-12-20 11:55:08 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
That sounds honest and sweet. Go with it, you may add more at last minute. Just go with it, let your true feelings be known, it will mean more to her than hearing someone elses words coming out of your mouth.
2006-12-20 11:52:05 · answer #6 · answered by Michelle 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Please do not ask anyone to help you write your vows.....write them from your heart....take some time....think...feel....open your heart, your mind and your soul....think about how you felt when you asked this woman to marry you and she said yes....think about how you felt when you kissed her for the first time....remember those feelings and write to her...you are saying your vows to her no one but her....this is a promise...an intimate promise you are making to her......speak from your heart...always do that and you will be a happy man......Good luck and congratuations...you've got a good start.....
2006-12-20 11:49:11 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it's great the way it is! I would just change 'most good looking man' to 'best looking man'. That's it. Very sweet!
2006-12-20 11:46:32 · answer #8 · answered by They call me ... Trixie. 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's beautiful! Straight from the heart, and the love of your life will love it.
2006-12-20 11:45:48 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Love it! If it is straight from your heart your (future) wife will love it too....good luck and I wish you a long and happy marriage....
2006-12-20 12:06:26 · answer #10 · answered by Megan P 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋