new zealand is a country which is cool in every way
they 're the best at rugby
so my friends say
the school here is different
we have homework everyday
i hope it 's true but if its not
my friends are gonna pay!
2006-12-19 14:10:09 · 13 answers · asked by alexandrabrown1996 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
thankyou esther and amberharr.....
2006-12-19 14:49:52 · update #1
im only nine thank u very much !!!!!!!!!!
2006-12-20 14:09:56 · update #2
i thinkk it is cool and very creative. u should write more poems
2006-12-19 14:22:45 · answer #1 · answered by hamster gurl 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's pretty good except it doesen't seem to go in a pattern with the lines you know? Like it seems off beat when I read it, you could try using different words instead to make it easier to read.
2006-12-19 14:35:46 · answer #2 · answered by Lizzy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
between 1 and 10, 1 being worst, 10 being best, i'd give it a whopping 5.
2006-12-19 14:28:37 · answer #3 · answered by hotbigtoad 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good if you're 9 years old.
2006-12-19 15:25:26 · answer #4 · answered by mrquestion 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yaa cool
2006-12-19 14:12:32 · answer #5 · answered by amberharris20022000 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
hurmmm
for me its ok...
but improve little bit okay!!~
2006-12-19 14:35:55 · answer #6 · answered by Girl S 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The next lines in the poem:
Don't like the poem
I think its gay!!!!!
2006-12-19 14:15:47 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 3⤋
it is cool, it rimes, but it dont make sense
are you a pro!!!!........ nah you not
2006-12-19 15:49:14 · answer #8 · answered by JBF_man 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its alright
2006-12-19 14:23:20 · answer #9 · answered by booyah™ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
=_=''
i think it is random
it is untruthful
2006-12-19 14:47:36 · answer #10 · answered by Blue Fairy 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋