Up there the moon is hanging solemnly,
The night is sleeping,
Everything is so silent and still
Here I am, cold and lonely
My mind brings me back to the past
The best ages of my life
No one will understand
How much is enough
How do I struggle so hard
just to pass a day,
a brief moment in my life
I’m just nothing and shall always be
And so here I am
Dreaming about my happy childhood
It’s nothing now but just a sweet memory
And my eyes wet when I remember
how I used to be a vigorous girl
No one will ever care about me
I feel really sleepy and cold
But I know it won’t last long
After this I will once again be in my place
The wind is breezing, playing the night’s lullaby
And I close my eyes
no one will care
up there the moon is watching silently
I feel warmer now, with the night as my quilt
and I will be at ease forever more
2006-12-01 22:41:56 · 5 answers · asked by wonder why 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
It's a great poem, but please know that everyone has felt that way at one time or another. I know I have; I've been struggling with depression since I was ten.
If you need someone to talk to, feel free to contact me. I've been there, and I'm a poet as well.
2006-12-02 00:44:02 · answer #1 · answered by The_Cricket: Thinking Pink! 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is beautiful in the way certain sad poems are...
I hope you are not meaning it otherwise I am sad you are back at it.
Except if it is just mean to be beautiful.
By now, you can see many persons aren't indifferent.
Go on writing poetry, please.
It seems to come easy to you.
When you are back home, you might find an editor.
I am sure, you will.
Well, I am a bit at a loss with words, Golden Age...
2006-12-02 08:33:29 · answer #2 · answered by klaartedubois 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I remember in the Bible the king of Isreal, David was the depressed alot. Yes, the man that God said was after his own heart was depressed.
He found comfort in the lord. He wrote alot of hebrew poems known as the Psalms. God loved david alot and would help him in all his trails. You should check it out in the old testement. Psalms.
God promised those would seek him with all their heart and soul would find him. Pray and ask him to guide your path.
2006-12-02 07:12:57 · answer #3 · answered by jack 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it is very sad and I hope you will show it to a teacher, counsilor, clergyman, doctor or your parents One of the commandments is not to murder and I hope I am wrong but it sounds like you are thing about suicide and that is Murder
2006-12-02 07:03:33 · answer #4 · answered by devora k 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Look just don't do it there are people you can talk to about depression. Please see your GP at the earliest opportunity.
2006-12-02 06:45:20 · answer #5 · answered by Bohdisatva 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋