what do you think of this apology i wrote my gf any suggestions?
Melissa I know that I hurt your feelings yesterday and im sorry, it suppose to be a joke and I didn’t know it would hurt you so much . I love you Melissa I couldn’t sleep last night knowing that I hurt the girl that I care about the most . I laid awake thinking of you tortured until dawn. Will you ever forgive me
Always and forever William Wright
2006-12-01 11:38:18 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Beautiful. I think you should put " Please, can you forgive me" instead of "Will you ever forgive me" though..
Stunning apology...if only all men were so caring! :)
Goodluick x
2006-12-01 11:40:37 · answer #1 · answered by tahanni 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
dude, don't write an apology! Go to her and tell her personally! it is always better to apologize personally than in writing. There are always questions after an apology and by doing it personally, you can answer these questions.
Another thing, an apology does not end with just "sorry" and some explanation. You need to make a promise that the same incident will not happen ever again. Give her assurance that you really love her.
Good luck, dude.
2006-12-01 11:45:42 · answer #2 · answered by coolguy 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow! You really do need advise!
Just tell her, Melissa I love you and never meant to hurt you. I thought it was a joke but late last night in viewing your anger I couldn't rest. The thought that I hurt you upset me. Can you ever forgive me?
**** also try bringing a small token! Like a small box of choclates or some of her favorite candy.
Hope I could help!
2006-12-01 11:47:13 · answer #3 · answered by charleston_chic_323 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think it's very bad, for these reasons:
1. Writing as opposed to speaking is a copout.
2. You don't go around saying "I love you" to girls, when you don't even know what that means.
3. When you apologize, you don't ask people to forgive you. Apologize and then it's up to them to have enough grace to forgive you, without you pressuring them more.
4. The whole thing just stinks and sounds extremely weak, pathetic, nauseating and unmanly. It would make and girl with half a brain want to vomit.
You need to develop your character some more and forget about girls for a long time. I hope that she understands that and tells you to get lost.
YUK!
2006-12-01 11:39:54 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Sounds convincing to me William!!
2006-12-01 11:40:57 · answer #5 · answered by Infinite 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
First of all my middle name is Melissa.So when i read it.It gives me an expression that your talking to me.But your not!!I think it will work
2006-12-01 11:40:48 · answer #6 · answered by くる. 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Sounds good to me.
2006-12-01 11:40:45 · answer #7 · answered by tarina12002 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Did u really write that bro......not bad....sounds like its from a movie script....lol
2006-12-01 11:40:47 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
SOUNDS GOOD TO ME BUT WHY DID YOU PLAY A JOKE ON HER IF YOU LOVED HER
IF YOU REALLY LOVED HER YOU WOULDN'T HAVE PLAYED JOKE ON HER
2006-12-01 11:45:56 · answer #9 · answered by JENNIFER C 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes very nice and intelligent. also add some description like:
my heart cannot pump blood whithout you in it.
or something like:
you are what keeps me from wanting to die. you're my shinning star in night
Girls love poems. or story's trust me
2006-12-01 11:41:56 · answer #10 · answered by taz 2 · 0⤊ 3⤋