Madam,
I like to inform you that your colleagues had ordered some Swedish items from Wrist Middle East Sharjah yesterday. We have kept the items ready. Please find the attached mails for the invoices and details of the items. Some of the items will be delivered by next week. So Please inform me about the follow up.
Thank you,
Sina.
2006-11-19 16:33:04 · 9 answers · asked by sina2sona 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Other - Education
Dear Madam,
I would like to inform you that your colleagues ordered some Swedish items from Wrist Middle East Sharjah yesterday. We have prepared these items for shipment. Please find the attached the invoices and details of the items. Some items will be delivered next week, so please inform me when they are received.
Thank you,
Sina.
2006-11-19 17:16:06 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Madam,
I would ike to inform you that your colleagues had ordered some Swedish items from Wrist Middle East Sharjah yesterday. We have kept the items ready. Please find the attached mails for the invoices and details of the items. Some of the items will be delivered by next week. So Please inform me about the follow up.
Thank you,
Sina.
2006-11-20 00:43:45 · answer #2 · answered by Silent love 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Madam,
I would like to inform you, that your colleagues had ordered some Swedish items from Wrist Middle East Sharjah yesterday. We have kept the items ready. Please find the attached mails for the invoices and details of the items. Some of the items will be delivered by next week. So please inform me about the follow up.
Thank you,
Sina.
2006-11-20 00:42:57 · answer #3 · answered by ♥♥Jabbawockeez♥♥ 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Your Swedish items ordered from Wrist Middle East Sharjah are ready for delivery. Attached are the invoice and details. You should receive some of the items by next week. Please contact me about any follow up questions you might have.
2006-11-20 00:44:10 · answer #4 · answered by MisterRE 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Recently your colleagues prdered some Swedish items from Wrist Middle East Sharjah. We have the items ready for delivery. Please read the attached emails for the invoices and details of the items. Some of them should arrive by next week. Please reply with follow up.
2006-11-20 00:38:36 · answer #5 · answered by Kevin Y 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
First sentence - insert "would" after the first word, have instead of had.
Second sentence - Replace with "The item are ready."
Third sentence - Please find the attached invoices and details of the items.
Fifth sentence - delete the word "so" at the beginning, change "inform" to "contact".
2006-11-20 00:40:21 · answer #6 · answered by M P 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The first and last line need correcting.
it should be....I'd like to inform you.. or...I would like...Not I like...
The last line is wrong.
Eliminate the word "So"....OR, Take the period out, after the word
"week", Don't capitalize the "S" in the word "so" or the "P' in please.
Make it one sentence. You never begin a sentence with the word "SO".
2006-11-20 00:41:16 · answer #7 · answered by Molly 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Please be informed that your Company's order from Writst Middle East Sharajah, placed yesterday; (insert date) is being processed.
Invoices attached.
If you have any questions or comments please feel free to reach me at: (give address or email address).
Thank you for your patronage.
Sincerely,
Sina (give last name).
2006-11-20 00:39:04 · answer #8 · answered by Norton N 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I would like to inform you that your colleagues has ordered.....................
2006-11-20 00:38:20 · answer #9 · answered by RoxieC 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋