I really like this girl and i want to put this poem on her desk. Tell me what you think?

Question

I'm going to put this poem before class starts and while nobody is there. This is to prevent anyone from seeing who put it. As for people reading it nobody really cares about that stuff. Also it will be addressed to her but my name won't be written and shes always sitting in the same place since the beginning of the year. Also tell me how i should decorate the poem. I have an idea but i want other opinions.She's 19, im 17(she was born in Mexico). we talk sumtimes

To Pamela, the Princess of Mexico

When I think of the perfect girl
You’re the only one that comes to mind

With the intellect of a genius,
Eyes of an angel,
Hair as soft as silk,
And a smile that lights up even the darkest room
No wonder you are God’s only work of art

You’re an amazing girl, an amazing person
You’re special and irreplaceable in my heart

Answer 1

WOW that's really good...you don't even need to decorate it or anything....I know I'd love it if a guy gave me something like that....It's perfect, I'm sure she'll love it

Answer 2

I would just talk to her and tell her how you feel about her. I found that talking to a girl about liking her usually proves to be better then her finding out in a different way, such as a poem. If youre afraid to talk to her about how you feel, i dont think you should date her.

Answer 3

well I'm a girl and if i would find that on my desk i would be so pleased cause that is so sweet. Also just a tip look at her reaction to the note if she likes it you should really ask her out and tell her it was you who wrote the letter!

Answer 4

Change up the double amazing to something else.
You've been touching her hair? That's kinda creepy.

Answer 5

to tell u the truth i think poems are tooooo gushy,i think u should just give her attention and talk to her more and let things fall into place