Oh Donna full of grace and soul
You are my ace in the hole
I love your face but it doesnt matter
your body and breasts are so much better
When we kiss It feels so dam good,
But in the end to be in bed with you is my goal.
You can kiss me all you want Oh Donna
but stop the kissing unless your madonna
IF we hold hands at the mall
And you must rub my waste
dont make it too obvious your with me
or else youll scare away the hotty at the end of the hall.
My feet are tired you can rub them,
as I am the man and the owner,
if you dont like it and dont agree
you can leave and be a loner.
I hope she likes it. I really love her and hope we can be together for a long time
2006-09-11 13:57:10 · 16 answers · asked by ast5792 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
lol oh yeah ur gonna sweep her off her feet
2006-09-11 14:00:20 · answer #1 · answered by Angelica 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
umm it is very sexual. why not also talk about her personality. if ur only goal is to be in bed with her, marriage will not really work out
IF we hold hands at the mall
And you must rub my waste
dont make it too obvious your with me
or else youll scare away the hotty at the end of the hall.- and that part. BAD. really BAD
2006-09-11 21:00:07 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
You asked! In the end you must make the final call, BUT I strongly disagree!! I'm sure you want this to be a night to remember, however why not make her smile before she frowns. You must love her, so why not do something that'll give her butterflies evertime she remembers the night you asked those 4 words every woman wants to hear!!!!
2006-09-11 21:13:49 · answer #3 · answered by faith 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
IF we hold hands at the mall
And you must rub my waste
dont make it too obvious your with me
or else youll scare away the hotty at the end of the hall.
this part will get her mad at u, unless ur doing it in a teasing tone, and btw congrats!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2006-09-11 21:13:31 · answer #4 · answered by B.M.W 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hahah you're such a joker
2006-09-11 20:59:07 · answer #5 · answered by Justine 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that you might need to rewrite the poem....I didn't like it. Sorry.
2006-09-11 21:01:42 · answer #6 · answered by lady_bug418 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Haha..I would laugh. Good joke!
2006-09-11 21:04:59 · answer #7 · answered by StormyRain 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, well if that actually works, err...well, whatever floats your boat.
2006-09-11 20:59:16 · answer #8 · answered by I Know Nuttin 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if u really want to marry her i wouldnt give her that for sure
2006-09-11 21:00:42 · answer #9 · answered by adnama_n_werd 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i would tell u to forget about marring me
2006-09-11 21:00:58 · answer #10 · answered by troublemaker272000 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋