this for my special friend....is this good enough...!!!
what you done for me
I really can’t explain
What you’ve done for me
You’ve taken all I have
And shown me what could be
You’ve been there through my sorrow
And tried to find a smile
You’ve stood there by my side
You’ve walked that extra mile
You’ve been the one to hold me
When everything seemed wrong
You’ve offered to be the one
I’ve wanted for so long
You’ve found out who I really am
When no one else could see
You’ve made me into so much more
Than I ever thought I’d be
You’ve been the one to be there
If ever I need a friend
You’ve been the one to love me
Now, I’ll love you til the end
I really can’t explain
What you’ve done for me
But every night I’ll thank God for you
You mean the world to me
2006-09-10 17:52:25 · 8 answers · asked by shaffy 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I think that that is a poem that would be just below Shakespeare. You have real potential. I might want to use that poem myself if I ever met someone like that.
If someone was to right something like that about me, I would be more than flattered. This one almost touched my soul, (Yes that's a true accomplishment.) I think that the person you wrote this for might kiss you right after your done.
I think it is more than good enough. I think that is superb. Kepp practicing. I think that you will make a fine poet.
Have a wonderful day.
2006-09-10 18:07:26 · answer #1 · answered by Jarod R 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice seems extremely heartfelt and sincere, I'd say the person receiving it will be flattered by your kind words.
2006-09-11 00:59:28 · answer #2 · answered by messedupsingledad 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Ya i love it. I wish i could find someone to write poetry like that for me. Keep writing you have potential.
2006-09-11 00:57:09 · answer #3 · answered by Khristian B 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Fantastic poem from a Stunning Woman!! I wish you were sending it to me!!
2006-09-11 01:05:01 · answer #4 · answered by f4fanactic 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its a good poem I'm just wondering are you good in bed and
can i have sex with you because your really hot and you
have nice breasts
2006-09-11 03:06:15 · answer #5 · answered by xxx 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's quite good. I am certain your friend will enjoy it very much.
2006-09-11 00:54:31 · answer #6 · answered by Miss J 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it
2006-09-11 00:58:26 · answer #7 · answered by just curious 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
excellent......i would be honored and moved to have that written about me.
2006-09-11 00:55:18 · answer #8 · answered by blkhawk51 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋