well i broke up with a gurl and i didnt relize how much i loved her until i did it and i just need a good poem to send to her to tewll her how lost i am without her so please help me out!!!
2006-09-10 16:29:59 · 6 answers · asked by twiztidjuggalo123456789 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Trust me - just tell her how you feel in your own words. She'll appreciate your honesty more than she would a poem.
Oh... and think about changing the About line on your profile. Especially if you think she might see it.
2006-09-10 16:42:03 · answer #1 · answered by Anon 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I ne'er was struck before that hour
With love so sudden and so sweet.
Her face it bloomed like a sweet flower
And stole my heart away complete.
My face turned pale, a deadly pale.
My legs refused to walk away,
And when she looked what could I ail
My life and all seemed turned to clay.
And then my blood rushed to my face
And took my eyesight quite away.
The trees and bushes round the place
Seemed midnight at noonday.
I could not see a single thing,
Words from my eyes did start.
They spoke as chords do from the string,
And blood burnt round my heart.
Are flowers the winter's choice
Is love's bed always snow
She seemed to hear my silent voice
Not love appeals to know.
I never saw so sweet a face
As that I stood before.
My heart has left its dwelling place
And can return no more.
2006-09-10 23:40:08 · answer #2 · answered by shaffy 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Seek Not My Heart
by Kit McCallum
Oh gentle winds 'neath moonlit skies,
Do not you hear my heartfelt cries?
Below the branches, here about,
Do not you sense my fear and doubt?
Side glistening rivers, sparkling streams,
Do not you hear my woeful screams?
Upon the meadows, touched with dew,
Do not you see my hearts a'skew?
Beneath the thousand twinkling stars,
Do not you feel my jagged scars?
Seek not my mournful heart kind breeze,
For you'll not find it 'mongst these trees.
It's scattered 'cross the moonlit skies,
Accompanied by heartfelt sighs.
It's drifting o're the gentle rain,
A symbol of my silent pain.
It's buried 'neath the meadow fair,
Conjoined with all the sorrow there.
It's lost among the stars this night,
Too far to ease my quiet fright.
No gentle winds, seek not my heart,
For simply ... it has torn apart.
2006-09-10 23:33:12 · answer #3 · answered by redunicorn 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you broke up with HER, then just tell her you want her back. I'm sure she will take you... if not here's a poem:
Walk With Me
by Munda
Walk with me, the path of life,
to explore every bend of the road
Enjoy with me the beauty of life,
along its wonderful way
Find comfort with me, in each other's arms,
when grief crosses our path
Find strength with me, in each other's strength,
when despair lies in wait
Laugh with me, a single true laugh,
to enlighten another's distress
Cry with me, a single true tear,
to understand true happiness
Cherish with me, the wonders of life,
as they need to be preserved
Rejoice with me, in the mysteries,
of what is yet to be
Find peace with me, in each other's souls,
when the world has gone insane
Find love with me, in each other's hearts,
until this life has been fulfilled
And when the path comes to an end
I hope we can say from within
We've known the beauty of true love,
our love came from within
2006-09-10 23:34:00 · answer #4 · answered by steve 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you relly dOnt niD any poems.. just gO to her talk tO her, tel everything dats inside your heart! be yourself! itz not funny tO be 'kOrny!' sometimes it better to be like dat because some gurls like dat way! sO gudlUck dUde!
2006-09-10 23:35:39 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
u moron, if u have a good girl just keep her
2006-09-10 23:35:17 · answer #6 · answered by Mighty Mike 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋