before you read this i have to say my question is at the end but this is my school poem so please tell me the truth and read it all
i often ask my self if i could have changed time what would i have changed well after long thought it is not hard i know i would have took this to heart.
my best friends father died i would bring him back and i would bring back my meories of my favroite anut. my grandmothers mother she would be so pround to see her grandkids grow up for a while and maybe i would bring back the old days and kids would not be so spoiled just maybe and if i could i would bring back my real dad and maybe meet him the rumors are quit bad. but most of all i know i would always have the love to know i would bring this back only if i could! now my question is the poem is it silly?
2006-08-14 16:02:05 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I don't think so. Lots of people would like to change the past, so it's normal to think like that.
2006-08-14 16:07:30 · answer #1 · answered by EMUmonster 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No. The true meaning of the poem lies in your heart not the words. I think it is very nice. If anyone gives you any sh** about as i sure some smart *** people might, it only matters how you feel about it. If what you wrote in this poem is truly from the heart then it is right and good. I can tell that you have a good heart because most of what you would change was something for someone else. GOD BLESS!!
2006-08-14 23:14:48 · answer #2 · answered by james c 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
We can not change the past, and we sometimes have to live with the heart aches that come with choices that we make.
But I tell you what you are on the right track to building a future that will have many, many good memories for you to look back on , and you will be glad that others can not go back and change them either.
You keep doing what you are doing and life will become sweeter for you, and a much better place because of people like you who leave wonderful impressions on the lives of those you touch.
Like me and many of those who are reading this now.
Keep up the good work.
2006-08-14 23:43:55 · answer #3 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it but it is sad that we can not really bring back the time but the fact that you realized its worth is important now. We learn from our past as to make a better future. God bless!
2006-08-14 23:33:09 · answer #4 · answered by justurangel 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a poem is an expression of your soul. if it is what you feel then you are on the right track. i can feel your pain.
2006-08-14 23:20:33 · answer #5 · answered by luvdoctor 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋