I hear the distant echo of butterfly ghosts, trapped in the voids in my eye
I have chased you through many incarnations/ and i caught you
in a web of chained karmic destiny
we see past the disguise, the facade we wear , while incarnate
on the physical plane
I catch you once again, and death will never touch you
you are safe eternally
trapped in the voids of my eyes
2006-08-06 06:19:58 · 20 answers · asked by darkangel1111 5 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
thanks for asking and no I dont think i have found the person that i wrote the poem for
2006-08-06 07:03:46 · update #1
Sorry Dark, But i didnt like it.
2006-08-13 22:47:41 · answer #1 · answered by NoxecA 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Sorry pal, either I have no taste at all or this is completely senseless!
I honestly would like to say it is very deep and meaningful, maybe it is, but as a common sort of feller it meand nothing at all to me, it must be aimed at a higher plane?
2006-08-06 13:34:53 · answer #2 · answered by budding author 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your poem speaks of one whom is chasing a rainbow in the spirit that hovers against your will, but you find sanctuary in the eyes of God.
I am a published Author of Poetry and find your poem very intrusive to relativity in the unseen. You are thining my friend and that you shall prosper with.
2006-08-13 12:29:57 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you are doing some soul searching and that you are trying to find yourself and protect yourself from hurt. It is definitely a deep poem. I hope you find the inner peace and healing in this life.
2006-08-14 11:09:07 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cool. Very thought-provoking. Interesting.
It reminds me of my cousin's poems.
2006-08-06 13:24:57 · answer #5 · answered by tslittleflower 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's very cool. I wish I could write poetry.
2006-08-14 07:16:09 · answer #6 · answered by Ana 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Islam is a great religion of peace and mercy
come and explore it
http://www.myislamweb.com/forum/index.php
2006-08-06 13:23:56 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
You are save eternally only if you accept Jesus as your savior.
2006-08-06 13:25:32 · answer #8 · answered by Carol M 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes. It spoke to me.
2006-08-14 02:47:48 · answer #9 · answered by R. F 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
did the person you're in love with and who you wrote this for like it???????
2006-08-06 13:43:22 · answer #10 · answered by 000000000000 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋