this is an e-mail i mde for a girl. read and tell me what changes to make!?

Question

i am so drunk right now so its going to take me a while to make this e-mail. i want you to know that i think your the hotest neighbor i have ever had! you are so pretty and ytou know i think this about you. however i want you to forget aboiut that.

after i foundout that your sister thinks i am crushing over you(which is probly true but i want to deny it) i hav'nt been able to talk to you like a neighbor should. so i want us to only be friendly neighbors that way i get the ocasional party invites that a neioghbor should get!

i'm not flirtin, im DRUNK and im asking that you forget that i think your so hot, and plead that we hang out some time and be friendly!

i need a female frined that is'nt in high school!

Answer 1

Okay, 24 yo female here advising you not to send that letter. There's nothing more immature sounding than a guy rambling on about how drunk he is. Sleep on it, think about it again tomorrow, go talk to her in person perhaps, when you've sobered up though.

(Unless she's also drunk, in which case I'd say, go for it man!)

Answer 2

1)spelling mistakes
2)try avoiding words like hot again and again
3)and say can we be friends?

Answer 3

i guess you are old enough to go into a more serious relationship rather than flirting around,.

Answer 4

sweet

Answer 5

that sucks.....you tell her that your drunk....
i dont know how she will react
grow up.... find another way to tell it.....
tell he that you're not drunk .....you're jus being honest

Answer 6

that's really sweet!

Answer 7

you need to be more selfsure.you can do it

Answer 8

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