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Question

"Wht Do U Wnt Frm Me"

I've tried it all twice or more
Told the lies and hit the floor
Broken down, what is real?
Hoping, doubt try to kill
Each other in the war that's in
My head I hurt from all my sins
Grin and bare the pain and angst
Sort thru all my brain's complaints
Ain't enough I need some help
What's it like to be myself
Hands are shaky, fuse is short
Starin' at the news report
To ignore the sound is hard
Bankrupt with a credit card
House I live in is a mess
Sqwermin in my flesh

[Hook:]
What do you want from me?
I have given all I can
I don't know what it's gonna take
Can you make me understand?
What do you want from me?
Is it just no use to try?
I don't know what it's gonna take
Because I've no more tears to cry

Got no dough to pay the bills
Sanity ran for the hills
Sorta feels like comin' down
Comin' down, comin' down
Lightnin' flashing, poorin' rain
My reflection says you're in pain
You're insane, can't explain

Why I tend to think these things
Demons with there horns and fangs
Steal from you then call you names
Planes and trains, automobiles
Same thing as a bag of pills
Make it strong and make it fast
Ain't no way to make it last
Down and out, sick and tired
I wallow in the mire

[Hook:]
What do you want from me?
I have given all I can
I don't know what it's gonna take
Can you make me understand?
What do you want from me?
Is it just no use to try?
I don't know what it's gonna take
Because I've no more tears to cry

Workin' hard may leave you broke
Gotta learn to steal from folks
Baseball, hot dogs, apple pie
Chevrolet not zenith skies
Sky's are full of poison air
Family photo, comb your hair
Wear a smile, wear a tie
Lie and don't be camera shy
Damn if I could be like you
I'd make the same mistakes you do
Murder people over seas
For the need to feed your greed
Nothing's free, a price was paid
With a rocket propelled grenade
Morning's purple, day is gray

just wanted to say hey

Answer 1

cool!!!!

Answer 2

Oh my god its raven

Fading them all

You better hit the turns

Cause she will burn you

Making Everyone

Learn its Raven on a

Mission to get something fixing

This a new rendition of a higher power

Always thinking a thousand miles an hour

With no guilt of remorse

Im coming through

like a

Clydesdale horse

Of course

Welcome to my Domain

Yes Im a little

bit insane

But sit back

And enjoy

The show

As I

Flow

Here we

GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Answer 3

that was cool, i think you took awhile to make that up. it said a lot, with a lot of personality. keep writing, but don't bother with that bag of pills, you know what i mean, you might have a future in writing songs or poetry. just by expressing yourself, a lot of country songs are like that.

good luck with it.

Answer 4

I need to go to sleep after reading this book.

Answer 5

Did you write that youself it is pretty good but it kinda sounds gloomy.

Answer 6

whats the Q

Answer 7

Wow- great stuff; you've put a lot of thought into what you've written.

Answer 8

some of it i can relate to. but the messy house is "squirming in your flesh"?

How about "just can't seem to get no rest" ?

Answer 9

I don't even feel like reading all of that.

Answer 10

you have obvious issues with depression. but hey you have poetry going for you.

Answer 11

too long of a question