As I lay here in my room
I fantasize u touching me in places that make me say, “baby ooh”
Kissing my skin so gentle I moan
Your in the right places it seems all along you’ve known
I get lost in your lips so soft and so sweet I close my eyes tight as I feel the heat
Your torturing me I want you so bad
Come on baby I'm going mad
Our eyes meet as you slip inside
Satisfy my body and my mind
In and out I shout your name
We both scream as our climax came
U whispered “baby I love you”
And I knew it was true so I said “baby I love you too”
2006-07-06 06:55:09 · 16 answers · asked by Lilly 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
I really like it,
2006-07-06 06:59:55 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
If you never had sex before, you are destroying the real sensation of sex with the description you have in mind. It seem like you want to have sex. I will tell you now, keep your self pure until after marriage. Your mind, body, and soul is worth it. If your husband don't fulfill the sexual needs like your poem, you will be dissatisfied with something that is precious.
2006-07-06 14:03:52 · answer #2 · answered by Antonio J 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are too good that too you have made my pc hot with ur imagination baby you would be great and i imagine the intensity of your peotry after you had sex mine goodness. sexy
2006-07-06 13:59:24 · answer #3 · answered by ramesh n 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's a good start to giving it up. problem is, you'll need an after sex poem soon. that'll be a bit darker than this one I guarantee you.
2006-07-06 13:58:19 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
poetry is the we express our feelings and emotions inside our selves
p.s never hade sex b4,just thout about it ?
2006-07-06 14:07:20 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Copyright your shyt!! That was cute,but it sounds like you have done some things, though. Copyright!Copyright!Copyright! Library of Congress. Poor-man's copyright--write it and send it to yourself--but don't open it!!
2006-07-06 14:03:10 · answer #6 · answered by gzmom 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds like a 14 year old virgin wrote it.
2006-07-06 13:57:56 · answer #7 · answered by candidworker 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
em...well that was good for rhyming and it made sense but...usually someone writes poetry to express themselves and u said u never had sex b4 so...
2006-07-06 13:58:04 · answer #8 · answered by akgirl1105 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's some rather "experienced" poetry.
2006-07-06 13:57:16 · answer #9 · answered by shae 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretty clever...I like it
I felt a little emotion there....
2006-07-06 13:57:42 · answer #10 · answered by Mary 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dang, you've got a good imagination...never? you could have fooled me.
2006-07-06 14:00:26 · answer #11 · answered by Goodspeed 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋