HAVE YOU DONE ALL YOU CAN?
Many days I sit and wonder why I feel so down
I felt so alone and felt I had been left to fend for myself
There was no mommy, no daddy or siblings
Simply no one to turn in my times of worry
I said to myself my Lord is here holding to you
He said in his word I will never leave nor forsake you
So why do I feel so alone
And then I hear a gentle voice saying to me ooooo
Have you done all you can? (Repeat 4 times)
Have you prayed without ceasing?
Have you read and memorized my word?
Have you fasted?
And have you believed that where there is life there is definitely hope?
Have you done all you can and left the rest to me ?
I’d unplug all the phones not wanting to be bothered by anyone
What the use to care for all noone cares for me
I felt like my mother chose bread over her own blood
And my brother he chose the hatred of my father over me
My sister chose the legacy of our long dead father over me
And my own father he chose to die then to stay with me
I questioned myself where is the Lord?
Who said in his word I will never leave nor forsake you
And then I hear a gentle voice saying to me ooooo
Have you done all you can? (Repeat 4 times)
Have you prayed without ceasing?
Have you read and memorized my word?
Have you fasted?
And have you believed that where there is life there is definitely hope?
Have you done all you can and left the rest to me?
And then I say to myself the One who said I will never leave nor forsake you
He has never left nor forsaken me
By faith I will believe
By faith I’ll pray without ceasing
By faith I’ll meditate on his word
By faith I’ll do all I can and leave the rest to God
By faith
And then I hear a gentle voice saying to me ooooo
Have you done all you can? (Repeat 4 times)
Have you prayed without ceasing?
Have you read and memorized my word?
Have you fasted?
And have believed that where there is life there is definitely hope?
Have you done all you can and left the rest to me? (Repeat 6 times)
oooooo Have you? ooooooooo
2006-07-04 06:03:56 · 35 answers · asked by Lady T 3 in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
I think you might be onto something. it is a very interesting idea, we go to God with our complaints, and He asks us, have you really been working on it? and I like the references to the scriptures.
that said, I have only one suggestion. you've apparently written this with a lot of personal feeling, which is a good thing. my heart goes out to you with your family situation, believe me I can really relate to you.
but it wouldn't hurt to go over it again, maybe tone down the anger you have toward your family. keep the focus on you and God, and not so much what your family has done to you.
but like I said, that's just my personal opinion. other than that, I think you're off to a really good start.
2006-07-04 06:12:42 · answer #1 · answered by cirque de lune 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋
That is amazing writing. I smell some real talant. Keeping writing. I think it will be benificial to you and all who read/hear.
The most pleasant aspect of this song is that even tho it involves sadness, you have pointed others to their only hope.
God bless and don't stop
2006-07-04 06:11:31 · answer #2 · answered by sandra_k19 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. I think it very pretty. I wish I could play music.
I can tell God inspired you to write this. You did great for being 13. Praise the Lord
2006-07-04 06:08:31 · answer #3 · answered by helpme1 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good potential, good imagination, and potential talent. keep at it, and increase your vocabulary so u can mix in words that really blend with the phrases. at times some words are out of place, so try to improve those.
and try not to make it too religious 'sounding' regarding the praying part, but rather try to use other words, but with the same meaning. this is for commercial potential if it comes to that...
good luck
2006-07-04 06:09:35 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I thought the song was laid out well, how ever i had no idea how the rhythm was, or how the song was going to go. Keep trying and try to relate your song with a rhythm ( it's in b flat, or it's in 4-4 time),
2006-07-04 06:15:43 · answer #5 · answered by fattyrpg 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice song.. You probably play the guitar..
Psa 27:10 When my father and my mother forsake me, then the LORD will take me up.
2006-07-04 06:08:05 · answer #6 · answered by † PRAY † 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-11-01 04:51:41 · answer #7 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's really good! I look forward to hearing it on the radio some day!
2006-07-04 06:07:37 · answer #8 · answered by sean's_mom 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A thirteen year old child and she has a better understanding than some adults I know.
God Bless YOU.
2006-07-04 06:07:12 · answer #9 · answered by drg5609 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yea i like it, if u want a good chance 2 become famous go 2 miami, their looking for all types of frsh new rappers
2006-07-04 06:07:21 · answer #10 · answered by colo21 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋