The Sea calls out in sorrow.
the fading sun silents the joyful laughs of children Animal and Human alike.
Oh Father up in heavan if it shall rain tonight may it rain for a thousand years
let the water wash away our sins, Show mercy on those who lack faith in you father, for Mans mind is weak in crisis and doubts in time of darkness.
Please bring forth the sun and the spirit of life that brings breath to our bodys. give us another day for our familys and children not yet grown.
When a infant turns into a child they will act as a child, we are your children clumsy as if children show mercy upon us oh heavanly father up in heavan.
Man have complained and begged for freewill you gave it to them and yet most blame you for their or anothers choice or decsion, show merci oh father in heavan/
bless those who pray for others for they have compassin for all Men, bless the child who mourns her mother or father for her and his heart is fruitful with life.
Give hope to the hopeless give love to the loveless. Guide us who believe so that we may do deeds in the name of righteousnous.
And as the moon rises so does the creatures of the shadows be our Light in the dark oh lord for in pure darkness we are blind. and stumble.
2006-07-01 23:41:33 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Society & Culture ➔ Religion & Spirituality
Do want an answer based on its merits as a poem or on the content and its ability to turn the hearts of men? On both counts: Blah.
2006-07-01 23:46:37 · answer #1 · answered by slackster1998 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Firstly you need to know how to spell heaven, especially as it seems so important to you.
Secondly I don't need mercy. I am an athiest and yet I consider myself to be a good and caring person. I'm sure you are well intentioned but, boy, I get sick of all this oh-so-predictable Christian patronising.
2006-07-01 23:51:50 · answer #2 · answered by Empea 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How is this supposed to call out to atheists..who dont beleive in a god and therefore do not pray...dont beleive in heaven and so on...looks like a sad long drawn out prayer to me
2006-07-01 23:51:02 · answer #3 · answered by jacki m 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Leave wherever you are and go buy every RUSH album ever made.
2006-07-01 23:46:36 · answer #4 · answered by Frompers 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
(pukes)
2006-07-01 23:43:40 · answer #5 · answered by johnny_zondo 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋