Just one more, since you guys don't like em?

Question

As we down here, struggle for as long as we know. In search of a paradise to touch. Dreams are dreams, and reality seems to be the only place to go
The only place for us. I know, try to make the best of bad situations
Seems to be my life's story. Ain't no glory in pain, a soldier's story in vain
And can't nobody live this life for me. It's a ride y'all, a long hard ride

Somebody break me I'm dreamin, I started as a seed in the semen. Swimmin upstream, planted in the womb while screamin. On the top, was my pops, my momma screamin stop. From a single drop, this is what they got. Not to disrespect my peoples but my poppa was a loser. Only plan he had for momma was to f**k her and abuse her. Even as a little seed, I could see his plan for me. Stranded on welfare, another broken family. Now what was I to be, a product of this heated passion. Momma got pregnant, and poppa got a piece of a*s.

Look how it began, nobody gave a f**k about me. Pistol in my hand, this cruel world can do without me. How can I survive? Got me askin white Jesus
will a ni**a live or die, cause the Lord can't see us. in the deep dark clouds of the projects, ain't no sunshine. No sunny days and we only play sometimes
When everybody's sleepin. I open my window jump to the streets and get to creepin. I can live or die, hope I get some money 'fore I'm gone
I'm only 19, I'm tryin to hustle on my own.
On the block where everybody and they pops tryin to slang rocks. I'd rather go to college, but this is where the game stops. Don't get it wrong cause it's always on, from dusk to dawn
You can buy rocks, glocks or a herringbone. You can ask my man Ishmael Reed
Keep my nine heated all the time this is how we grind. Meet up at the cemetary then get smoked out, pass the weed ni**a. That Hennessey'll keep me keyed ni**a. Everywhere I go ni**az holla at me, "Keep it real G". And my reply til they kill me. Act

Act up if you feel me, I was born not to make it but I did. The tribulations of a ghetto kid, still I rise

TUPAC SHAKUR

"2pac"

Answer 1

Painfully beautiful poetry. You are very talented. I hope you use it to get somewhere in life. I am sending love, light and blessings to you as you read this message.

Answer 2

If your a soldier and went into the military you can get a loan and go to college. Many people who grew up in the getto, now own houses and two cars and have a beautiful wife and kids who lovem. If you see life as a defeat, then it is.
I was abandon and taken in and I am going into the military to be a nurse. When I get out have high hopes for a good life.

Answer 3

I don't know where you're from, but this sounds like a Revelation from my hood. I hope you keep your head up, and don't die in vain, cause all your daddy's pleasure caused your momma so much pain. Your lyrics are hot, I hope I hear them on the air somewhere, that would be great

Answer 4

Mmmm. Breakfast burritos.

Answer 5

If you actually wrote that you have a talent that I would hope you don't waste.
And just in case your wondering, I'm a Christian Pastor.

Answer 6

you just had too much to say for me to read, but i felt bad nobody answered your question. Good Luck with all that.

Answer 7

If you think god can't see you, you got another thing comin'!
God created us to be with Him!
Just because you think earth sux doesn't mean you should kill yourself. i hate earth to but only because it sepperates me from being close to God! SO "SMILE, GOD LOVES YOU!!!!!!"

Answer 8

Are you going for depressing or comedy?

Answer 9

And your question is?

Answer 10

just lookin for attention huh? well thanks for the 2 points anyway....