This is the actual letter im planning to give someone can you guys help me and tell me if there anywhere wrong and give me some stuff to add if possible.
Dear Blank:
Blank, from the moment i first laid eyes on you, i though you were the most beautiful girl in the world. From that moment on i couldnt stop thinking about you. you are the most sweetest, kindest, prettiest girl, no one else can compare. Sometimes when I look at you i wont be able to take my eyes off you. I tried talking to you but i get so nervous when im around you. I keep picturing in my head the perfect thing to say to you, but perfect just doesnt seem good enough. Everytime i look at you my knees trembles, my stomach fills with butterfly and my hearts just melt. Everytime i think about you all i could do is smile. I would be walking down the street with this big grin on my face like an idiot but i dont care. ITs like no matter how bad my day has been when i see your face i just forget about everything.
2006-06-09 11:25:28 · 13 answers · asked by Richie 2 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
Things just dont seem the same no more . I used to hate listening to sappy love song, now i cant get enough of it. Your the reason i get up in the morning so i could see that pretty face of yours. Sometime i wish i wasnt such a coward and just go straight up to you and just talk to you. But I'm not that kind of guy. Day after day its the same old thing i keep saying to myself "Todays the day im going to talk to you her and ask her out", and time after time i just watched you walk away without every saying a word. I know one day i'm going to regret not taking the chance knowing if it would work or not. I dont know if you have a boyfriend or not but if you do hes the luckiest man alive. And if you dont i Hope you will find that special someone that can make you laugh, that can make you smile and just make you happy.
2006-06-09 11:30:43 · update #1
How sweet that is!!!!! Just don't scare her, sometimes poeple get a little creeped out if this comes as a total surprise. Before you give it to Blank maybe you should see how she feels about you. BUT I LOVE IT!!!
2006-06-09 11:31:03 · answer #1 · answered by Gloria 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's sweet. BUT the grammar is horrible; the words are misspelled. You need to capitalize the word "I". You also need to use punctuation; you have a lot of contractions without proper puncs. Also lots of run on sentences can you see how that might be hard to read and understand someone might lose interest if they cant follow the letter and give up plus it looks rather uneducated and you dont want someone to think that about you especially when you feel that way about them cause that could ruin everything before it even starts because .......see my point? But you have a good heart.
2006-06-09 11:33:02 · answer #2 · answered by clementine 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good intentions, but keep that to yourself. You've got to talk to her first. Somehow you must muster up the courage to do it. If she says yes to going out with you, then shorten your letter and give it to her. Or better yet, buy a blank greeting card and write a poem(a short poem). Also, make sure you avoid cliches such as your first sentence. As a couple of other people pointed out, fix the grammar, punctuation, and spelling. And make sure you toss out the cliches.(I know, I said this twice, but I want to make sure you understand me.)
Aria
*The illnovelist*
2006-06-09 11:48:45 · answer #3 · answered by illnovelist 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's so sweet. The girl you give it to will think it's really cute. Just fix those few grammatical errors.
2006-06-09 11:33:59 · answer #4 · answered by pbc132 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Really sweet...i'd say just send it the way it is...i would put a dried flower in with the letter....she'll have something of yours with her all the time.....
Beautiful.....made me smile
2006-06-09 11:32:50 · answer #5 · answered by xqueenyx 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's a bit long and sounds like you are stalking her.... skip the letter and just say hey i think you are beautiful, wanna go out sometime? she will probley say yes.
2006-06-09 11:31:48 · answer #6 · answered by busy mama 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
NO NO NO...This is a letter to give her after you have actually spoken with her. If you gave it to me ,I would think"Stalker".At least talk to her, man!
2006-06-09 11:32:22 · answer #7 · answered by Apple 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds to serious and you aren't even dating her ....no don't give her this letter I just read...sounds like your in love...keep the letter...and just ask her out to lunch and if it becomes serious between her and you and she feels the same then later give it to her...but naw...don't give it to her...
2006-06-09 11:31:45 · answer #8 · answered by qdrama1956 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awwwwww dats soooooo sweet!!! u should deffently give dat 2 her!! awwwwwwww!
2006-06-09 14:34:04 · answer #9 · answered by curlyfry 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I can;t read anyhting that long - BORING
2006-06-09 11:27:50 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋