just curious to see which one you guys like more
2 different and yet the same versions
1. here's the first:
Early, eager, excited snowflake
Released, free from your frosted fortress
A droplet of fresh, cool water frozen in time
No past, no future, one goal in mind
Sparkling,
Twirling,
Dancing down, down
To your goal, you doom
As greedy Green Earth greets you warmly
2. here's the second:
Early snowflake, released from the top
A droplet of fresh, cool water, frozen in time, with one goal on your mind
Sparkiling, twirling, dancing through the air
Down, down, closer
Graceful and Kind on your own
Icy and cruel with your kin, like a child caving into peer pressure
Reaching Green Earth
Only to sink deep into its skin, atmosphere, sky
And start all over again
2007-11-20
14:11:05
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