I need help from english native speakers?

Question

Is this correct in english and is this understandable ?


Thank you very much for your quick and positive response.
I will talk to my teachers when classes resume, on January 7.
As far as the finances are concerned, I will submit a request on the spot, but normally my university provides some financial support.
Anyway I remain very interested and I hope that my teachers will give their consent on the subject you will propose me.

Sincerely yours,

This is a response to an email regarding an internship in an american university (I'm french).
About the last paragraph : I need a theme to know if this internship proposal is connected with my studies

I mean , I already have the agreement of this university to come. But they didn't say exactly what this internship consists of.

" I will submit a request on the spot" : I mean That I will submit a request when I am in the United States

Answer 1

Maybe you could reword the last paragraph like this.

Anyway I am still very interested and I hope my teachers will agree on the subject you suggest.

In a piece of writing like this I'd go for

Sincerely,

Answer 2

I would make the following changes:

Thank you very much for your quick and positive response.
I will talk to my teachers when classes resume, {remove this comma} on January 7.
As far as the finances are concerned, I will submit a request on the spot {"immediately" may be better here, depending on what you mean}, but normally my university provides some financial support.
Anyway I remain {"am still" is probably better than "remain"} very interested {put a comma here} and I hope that my teachers will give their consent {"approval"} on the subject you will propose {present simple is better than future} me."

I would put it like this:

"Thank you very much for your quick and positive response.
I will talk to my teachers when classes resume on January 7.
As far as the finances are concerned, I will submit a request immediately, but normally my university provides some financial support.
Anyway, I am still very interested, and I hope that my teachers will give their approval to whatever subject you suggest to me."

P.S. I disagree with the poster above about "sincerely yours." It is fine.

P.P.S. I agree with "suggest" instead of "propose", as commented by another poster. :) Also, we give approval "to" not "on", which I had previously typed quickly.

Answer 3

Here is how I'd write it:


Thank you very much for your quick and positive response.

I will speak with my teachers when classes resume, on January 7.

Regarding the finances, I plan to submit my application after I arrive in the United States. My university customarily provides partial financial support.

I remain very interested and look forward to my teachers' approval of whatever subject you recommend.

Sincerely yours,

Answer 4

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Answer 5

It looks but I don't understand the line "i hope that my teachers will give their consent on the subject you will propose me.

Answer 6

I think the answer from jihair2 was great, and I'd just recommend taking out "Anyway" which strikes me as too informal. You could replace it with "I assure you that" or something, if you'd like.

By "on the spot" I suspect you mean "when I arrive".

Answer 7

It's very good except for the last sentence, which shouldn't be "propose me" but "propose to me", I think.

Answer 8

THis looks fine until the last paragraph -- you lost me there!
What are you trying to write about?

Answer 9

this does not make sense - on the subject you will propose me

and its "yours sincerely" not Sincerely yours


but the rest is good

Answer 10

It is correct