Wish I had the skill of poets past
And write for you poems: Epics and Sonnets,
Ballads and songs of love and tell you
How I feel about you and what you do
To me when you look at me
With those lovely bright eyes
And bless me with your dimpled smile.
Since I lack this skill,
I'll ask the help of singing birds
At the dawn of spring,
The beauty of the setting sun
In a far-away yet undiscovered
Holiday destination,
The bright flames of the trees in autumn,
Freshly fallen snow in winter,
The smile on an infants face
And the laughter and innocence of a child.
2007-12-27 22:01:14 · 6 answers · asked by wallstreet 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
This is very good, and you like to write descriptively i love that it sounds like you would give anything to have or be with this person, the only thing that i would say is where you say
The beauty of the setting sun
In a far-away yet undiscovered
Holiday destination,
I would put land in there instead of holiday destination as the rest of the poem goes on to describe stand out things in landscape eg snow and autumn trees.
2007-12-28 00:53:58 · answer #1 · answered by lilmiz 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Funny! Title: Poet's past Skill. I believe you want to be a poet or not. Or is this an assignment. better if you have rhyming words. Your poem is ridiculous. Do you have any passion?
2007-12-28 06:20:48 · answer #2 · answered by will_bongkalao 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's beautiful..... I write poems myself.... (as I think everyone on this section does)... I see some latent skill. You're good, but you can be even better...
Title??? A Love Song
2007-12-28 08:01:29 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think its a sweet poem...
you have a good imagination and beautiful thoughts...
write more poems...
you will get better with each....
TITLE- Expressing Myself
2007-12-28 07:39:28 · answer #4 · answered by Μađħaνi 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Jerky with just few good flow bits ~~
2007-12-28 06:10:06 · answer #5 · answered by burning brightly 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
>heart felt notions
>secret thoughts
>thoughts of you
>from my heart
hope these might help
2007-12-28 08:04:45 · answer #6 · answered by rhonawk 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋