the haze of a winters sunset
welcomes the close
of but another day
overstuffed confusion
on the boder of contempt
patience whispers
don't jump to conclusion
the ear hears the stillness
the sound of
solitude
remoteness
something wrong
with the brain
that reflects this way?
to enter
sclience
stillness
to end the day,to begin another.
2007-12-27 17:16:35 · 3 answers · asked by dorian 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Thats really good.I liked thes econd stanza a lot.. Something wrong with the brain.... Is just OK.. Actually that appears a bit rude, not very polished you see....
Rest is Wonderful. Something worth Answering In Poetry Section after a long time.
TW K
2007-12-27 20:13:34 · answer #1 · answered by TW K 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, that's EXCELLENT!!!
Sorry to point this out but spelling in poetry is crucial to the 'flow' and you've made a couple of typos. Try Yahoo Answer's spell checker before posting. It would make for a much more enjoyable reading.
Thanks, I still enjoyed it very much.
2007-12-28 02:44:39 · answer #2 · answered by reclusive extrovert 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
'overstuffed confusion'
. . . quite true.
2007-12-28 21:45:06 · answer #3 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋