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Can someone check this.. I had to write about a couple at a banquet. It's for the play of Julius Caesar...
Social News: On May 28,1599

A sunny warm evening tonight Julius Caesar and his wife Calpurnia have decided to throw a party at a near by banquet in Rome. The party is a ‘goodbye’ party for Caesar because he will be departing to a military battle in Spain. Therefore, family and friends have arrived with and food and drinks as a way of celebrating together. The family and friends in attendance where Octavius Caesar ( Julius Caesar grandnephew &heir), Mark Antony ( a loyal friend and supporter of Caesar), Brutus ( Caesar’s best friend), Portia ( Brutus wife), Cicero ( a Roman senator), Lepidus, and more. When Portia entered Calpurnia couldn’t help but notice that the gold beaded dress Portia was wearing was the dress that she was looking for to wear for this special event . Continued in the details part

Calpurnia attempted to remain calm about the matter but Portia noticed that something was bothering Calpurnia. So, Portia asked her and Calpurnia told her about the dress, and Portia felt bad and let Calpurnia wear it. Minutes later Calpurnia and Portia came down the stairs. The spot light was just on Calpurnia and it felt great to have everyone eyes on her. When she was coming down the stairs she heard the beat for her and Caesar’s favorite song. Caesar came and meet her at the end of the stairs took her hand and started to slow dance. Everyone was surrounding them clapping and cheering with happiness. This special day was known as “ a couple at a banquet”.

Answer 1

It's a sunny, warm evening tonight. Julius Caesar and his wife Calpurnia have decided to throw a party at a nearby banquet in Rome. The party is a ‘goodbye’ party for Caesar because he will be departing for military duty in Spain. Therefore, family and friends have arrived with and food and drinks as a way of celebrating together. The family and friends in attendance were Octavius Caesar ( Julius Caesar's grandnephew &heir), Mark Antony ( a loyal friend and supporter of Caesar), Brutus ( Caesar’s best friend), Portia ( Brutus's wife), Cicero ( a Roman senator), Lepidus, and more. When Portia entered, Calpurnia couldn’t help noticing that the gold beaded dress Portia was wearing was the dress that she had been looking for to wear for this special event . Calpurnia attempted to remain calm about the matter, but Portia noticed that something was bothering Calpurnia and asked her. When Calpurnia told her about the dress, Portia felt bad and let Calpurnia wear it. Minutes later Calpurnia and Portia came down the stairs. The spot light was just on Calpurnia, and it felt great to have everyone's eyes on her. When she was coming down the stairs, she heard the beat for her and Caesar’s favorite song. Caesar met her at the end of the stairs, took her hand and started to slow dance. Everyone was surrounding them clapping and cheering with happiness. This special day was known as “ a couple at a banquet”.

I'd suggest the few changes I made, and also, remember that a banquet is an event, not a place.

Answer 2

Y to check..? Ur given as a Socila NEWS

Answer 3

It's good.