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dirty sheets
toss em aside
just use the comforter
to cover up

make love till ya moan
keep each warm
no comforter needed
just body heat

in the morn
do it again
no dirty sheets

just the comforter
and fresh coffee
to awaken
the next morn.

D.

ps hope he censors will print this,,,,,

2007-12-27 15:32:33 · 3 answers · asked by dorian 3 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

should have named it "in the heat of passion" dirty sheets don't mean "dirty.
dirty sheets mean through all caution aside.

2007-12-27 17:27:03 · update #1

the comforter means long awaited,and finally here....sorry.

2007-12-27 17:29:19 · update #2

3 answers

Hmmmm what a style of writing a poem...you know what even poems can be interpreted in different ways like your dirty sheets and all...they might be interpreted differently, but nice try of expressing your good night thoughts!!!

2007-12-27 16:49:57 · answer #1 · answered by E@rthGoddess 6 · 0 0

dirty sheets? EWEEEEEEEE !!!! no clean bed sheets on bed? EWEEEEEEE!!! THATS NASTY !!!!

2007-12-27 15:42:32 · answer #2 · answered by joes_mom86 5 · 0 0

good night

2007-12-27 15:39:38 · answer #3 · answered by saveitok 6 · 0 0

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