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It isn't finished yet, so dont start telling me to finish it like everyone says.
And it is about a person who has influenced my life alot lately.
I'm not sure if you like it, but just how is it?

Your Eyes

You ask me how I've been so far
I could tell you, but I'm not sure if you'd care
Well what do I have to lose
All I have to live for is your smile.
And every once in a while,
there's a story in your eyes.
Of a beautiful sunrise, of a moment of total surprise.
And you should know that I'll always be thinking about you
and I'll never forget the way your eyes were so blue,
when they saw a teardrop fall down, on my guitar.

Your eyes are like magnets,
drawing me closer every day.
And there’s something about the way they glow,
that makes everything feel ok.
They can see everything in me,
everything I always wanted the world to see.

2007-12-27 14:40:27 · 5 answers · asked by Michelle 3 in Entertainment & Music Music Lyrics

Because it’s better if they know,
even if a smile turns into nothing.
It’s better if they know,
even if the eyes close for a second too long.
It’s better if they know.

Im not sure if it makes sense to you, but it does to me.

2007-12-27 14:41:14 · update #1

Because it’s better if they know,
even if a smile turns into nothing.
It’s better if they know,
even if the eyes close for a second too long.
It’s better if they know.




Im not sure if it makes sense to you, but it does to me.

2007-12-27 14:41:18 · update #2

Because it’s better if they know,
even if a smile turns into nothing.
It’s better if they know,
even if the eyes close for a second too long.
It’s better if they know.




Im not sure if it makes sense to you, but it does to me.

2007-12-27 14:41:19 · update #3

Oh and sorry there are repeated details, i accidently did that.

2007-12-27 14:42:15 · update #4

And if you have any, suggestions?

2007-12-27 15:06:00 · update #5

5 answers

That's a really nice song.
It gave me the chills.

2007-12-27 14:44:29 · answer #1 · answered by dyyylannn 4 · 0 0

I have a new one out called, "Searching for a handicapped spot in the Target parking lot."....Oh yeah...your song is really nice!

2007-12-27 22:48:36 · answer #2 · answered by Big Bear 7 · 0 1

Love it. I cant even write like that, I try to but it sucks =D

2007-12-27 22:45:15 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

Awww. This is sweet, If you sang this or played this for th eperson its about im sure they would love it.
: ]

2007-12-27 23:45:17 · answer #4 · answered by klutzyblonde1985 2 · 0 1

love it! you're a great writer

2007-12-27 22:53:29 · answer #5 · answered by . 2 · 0 1

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