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I hear the spirits calling
Words from a language unwritten
I sit in a chair and wait…
I have waited a long time
The spirits will not shut up
They keep rambling on
…duty, honor, country
How can I get around it?
How can I get over it?
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2007-12-27 10:48:05 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I like it, TD. Spirits do haunt and keep haunting.
Wait, wait, he's got to see it.
Who's that in the picture? Felix? Does he know he is a dog in another life?
2007-12-27 19:02:15 · answer #1 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Now THAT should be submitted for publication...unique presentation, refreshing, new ideas...spirits with a language we don't understand....we always think they talk in English, don't we....outstanding!!!
To make it 'personal' at the ending line is the coup de grace!
Elysabeth
2007-12-28 00:29:50 · answer #2 · answered by Elysabeth 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think DFA needs a really good New Years eve BJ......and the world be a better place for him for me for everyone.
2007-12-27 11:37:02 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sointenly the answer to your silent query is to read "All Quiet on the Western Front."
2007-12-27 11:07:33 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Tom...we miss you!!! =0
2007-12-27 19:55:20 · answer #5 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Don't mean to be mean... but you might want to change the topic.
2007-12-27 11:02:56 · answer #6 · answered by jessica_dianka 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice POAM T.D.
2007-12-28 00:38:48 · answer #7 · answered by ? 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like this.
2007-12-27 17:02:36 · answer #8 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
ummm...you have very odd peoms
2007-12-27 10:53:34 · answer #9 · answered by night shadow 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
.....interesting...... "/
2007-12-27 10:57:12 · answer #10 · answered by ★Star Girl★™ 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋