I remember when we were friends
Years ago, when we didn’t even know
So innocent so quiet
Now your gone far now
Stuck inside a poison world
Drinking away, what you promised would stay
Friends
On bathroom walls we wrote notes
And we said, we’d never erase what was forever
But then it’s a lie again
I thought we were friends
I thought you’d listen
You say just go away
I don’t want to deal today
I walk across the lonely halls
Books clutched so I don’t fall
You told me once, you told me twice
Don’t let me go this way
Now the weekends you’re always gone
Drugs and alcohol lead you home
Tonight
I guess this is life
You think I should just loosen up
And you promise it doesn’t hurt
If you just see all the fun life can be
Skipping school and running away
Remember there is only one today
Light up and all the worries drain away
I thought we were friends
I thought you’d listen
You say just go away
I don’t want to deal today
I walk across the lonely halls
Books clutched so I don’t fall
You told me once, you told me twice
Don’t let me go this way
Now the weekends you’re always gone
Drugs and alcohol lead you home
Tonight
I guess this is life
I promised myself I wouldn’t become
What I hate
I know the world seems to linger
And tell me all these lies
Its okay
It’ll go away
Now she’s gone
And I’m wrong?
I thought were friends
Until the end
You’d listen
Tell me go away
Not today
When you don’t care anymore
It makes it hard to see
The way things used to be
2007-12-27 08:07:26 · 10 answers · asked by hawthorne_heights_421 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Lyrics
Kinda reminds me Bob Dylan's "Positively 4th Street," which is a good thing. Alcohol can really change people for the worse.
2007-12-27 08:22:01 · answer #1 · answered by gldmj5 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-02 10:28:13 · answer #2 · answered by melesa 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes its great but is this pop hip hop soft rock, that makes a difference mattering what kind of music it is but i think it great , also some people might not like the part about drugs maybe you could change that?? but its SOOOOOO COOL
2007-12-27 08:16:09 · answer #3 · answered by asdf 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
amazing hun.
im gonna add you as my contact because i am writing this song and i need your help and ideas.... :)
beautiful job. i love the part about drugs and alcohol lead you home....
so star for youu. =]
<3Rhyyain
2007-12-28 14:55:20 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice. Are you going to put them to music?
2007-12-27 08:14:38 · answer #5 · answered by Kerry 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
These are sooooooooo deep!They are way cool!How can you even duobt how good they are?BRAVO!!!
2007-12-27 08:18:19 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes theyre very good.
2007-12-27 08:13:50 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
OMG YOU WROTE THESE?! these are amazing lyrics!!! very very well done!
2007-12-27 08:12:17 · answer #8 · answered by going [[nowhere]] fast 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
pretty good. you've got a talent there.
2007-12-27 08:16:57 · answer #9 · answered by overmel 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
yes, i like it!
2007-12-27 08:17:37 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋