He pulled on it, and let go, the waist band of his pants slapping back against his butt."
2007-12-27 07:12:19 · 4 answers · asked by cynthia s 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
I agree pretty much with LTD: "He pulled on the waist band of his pants and then let go, so that it slapped againt his rear end"--UNLESS "it" is something other than the waistband, something mentioned in a previous sentence.
2007-12-27 07:45:04 · answer #1 · answered by aida 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Completely wrong...(what did he "pull on"...???)
Better:
He pulled on the waistband of his pants, letting it go, so it would slap against his rear end...
Although to be honest, the sentence makes no real sense to start with....
2007-12-27 15:22:38 · answer #2 · answered by Toots 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No. He pulled on the waistband of his pants, and let go, which made it slap against his backside....It still doesn`t seem to make complete sense though if `it` is his waistband.
2007-12-27 16:57:55 · answer #3 · answered by *~STEVIE~* *~B~* 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nope, it is very awkward. try rearranging the sentence
2007-12-27 15:17:18 · answer #4 · answered by LaTonya H 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋