the tears that fall
don't comprehend
the way it all
all began
in a flash
selling something out for cash
but you saved
but you had
but you got
now i've got mad
but this is me
and you are where?
2007-12-27 05:30:40 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
it's a studder block numbskull
the person he's writting to will choke on their words
instead of studdering
2007-12-29 12:22:04 · update #1
fumbleing for their words
whatever
picture the person he's speaking to digging for exuses
and he's comeing out with them for him/her
2007-12-29 12:22:57 · update #2
he nullified their game plan
and these things they thought were important didn't mean anything afterall
geese don't you read
between the lines
2007-12-29 12:24:26 · update #3
nice peom!
2007-12-27 05:45:08 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like the cocky speaker is envious about a ********* character he/she reads about in a book!
Use 'but' consistently and sparingly because it makes the poem a little incomprehensible.
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2007-12-28 00:01:38 · answer #2 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋