(of my song, it might be a little weird without listening to the music tho)
Pretty
Those eyes are pretty the way they are,
those lips are prettier than all the stars,
and you have no reason to say the things you say to me,
no, there's no excuse to say the things you say and think,
I see you can say what you want, but I wont let you to hurt me(4x)
You push and pretend,
put on a mask and mend,
your more than good enough,
your more than beautiful,
but there's no excuse
you have no reason to act so insolent to me
Your hands, so pretty the way they are,
your lips, sweeter than an apples core,
and no it's not ok to say the things you say to me,
and no, you cant act the way you know you wish to be
I see you can say what you want, but I wont let you to hurt me (4x)
wont let you hurt me
anymore
wont let you hurt me
anymore
so pretty
so pretty
so pretty
so so pretty
2007-12-27 04:25:25 · 21 answers · asked by BloodyRose 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
hey..it was wonderful .....in fact i set my own music.......lol.......
2007-12-27 04:28:53 · answer #1 · answered by angelic ? being 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice
2007-12-27 12:28:36 · answer #2 · answered by Big Papi 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice! But I didn't like the rythm! You could also use some more complex words! What you meant was nice but writing poems in a simple language are even harder than expressing them in a complex way! I mean that you should be a more expert person to write poems in such a simple language! :)
2007-12-27 12:35:34 · answer #3 · answered by farnaz a 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
PRETTY good. Just change the (4x) into a 3x. lot's of ppl hate repetition.
2007-12-27 12:29:04 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. Very nice. I can write songs also.
2007-12-27 12:28:49 · answer #5 · answered by Elizabeth S 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think the song is very good, makes for a perfect heartbreak song, should be a real big hit.
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Sweetie
2007-12-27 12:29:11 · answer #6 · answered by ♥Šωèé†íé♥ 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good but what genre of music is it for...or is just a slow song
2007-12-27 12:29:52 · answer #7 · answered by Mostwanted694 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Kind of hard to put on my ipod
2007-12-27 12:29:01 · answer #8 · answered by teri h 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think its great! anyone who can write poetry or music is very talented! and its especially ballsy to post it online!
2007-12-27 12:28:37 · answer #9 · answered by jackie 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its really good! Just.. you repeat a lot... the word.. pretty..
2007-12-27 12:28:12 · answer #10 · answered by Kelly<3 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah, I would need the music...
2007-12-27 12:27:42 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋