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Life, through a sight glass
Prepared, stylized, perfected
Controlled experiment
Organized information
Logical outcome
When I, under a quiet autumn moon
Spied a vision of beauty beyond belief
In her sleep, with the golden leaves falling
I laid next to her and stared at the sky
Love, through a looking glass
Pretentious, stubborn, perfect
Uncontrolled excitement
Organ grinder’s monkey
Illogical outcry
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2007-12-23 03:24:44 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Yes, there seems to be a moon and a monkey in the air these days...
2007-12-23 03:44:32 · update #1
I don't really want an audience but he's thrilled me on many occasions.
DANCE NOW! wherever you may be cause I am the Lord of the dance said he, and I'll lead you all wherever you may be, and I'll lead you all to the dance said he....diddley, de, de!
2007-12-23 10:11:05 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
When I, under a quiet autumn moon
Spied a vision of beauty beyond belief
In her sleep, with the golden leaves falling
I laid next to her grinding my organ
Love, through a Y!A crooked mirror
Pretentious, stubborn, perfect
Uncontrolled, spanking my monkey
I howl at the Moon..
2007-12-23 11:52:38 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
I liked the piece,and forgive any assumed offense, smiles
One analogy might be, that ANYONE having a Monkey in their life (Act), is likely to be a BIT player, in any scene. Kinda like a Ventriloquist,,,so much of the Trick is that hardly anyone is watching the operators Adams Apple, Bob up and down.
Hmmm? Maybe I do GET IT??
Good on ya.
Steven Wolf
2007-12-23 14:49:02 · answer #3 · answered by DIY Doc 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Not neccessarily a logical outcome...since you didn't have your glasses on when you laid down next to the organ grinder's monkey...and, the monkey, upon awakening OH MY GOD DID give out with an illogical cry....IT had it's glasses ON!!!
Elysabeth...poemhunter, as in .com
2007-12-23 12:24:02 · answer #4 · answered by Elysabeth 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
If your primate be unruly
is it not a must that you spank your monkey?
Does not the limit to perception
begin and end with the optices through which your life is filtered?
2007-12-23 11:30:10 · answer #5 · answered by Pee Amigo No 3 5 · 3⤊ 1⤋
Am i just soo stooge-strucked or that organ grinder is really an allusion to my retahded wrinkled boyfriend??? hee-hee =)
2007-12-23 11:30:16 · answer #6 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 4⤊ 0⤋
AHH!
this poem made my day..
good job....not surprised all ur poems are well put and meaningful don't forget funn to read!
2007-12-23 13:48:16 · answer #7 · answered by JaAfNy 1 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Loonacy, overwhelming all encompassing..
Organs throbbing, two as if they're one
The monkey puts its helmet on
The retarded dance of love has begun.
http://youtube.com/watch?v=d2AN7kBQOsw
2007-12-23 12:58:12 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 1⤋