her mother remarked, setting her embroidery down in her lap the better to observe her daughter. "And your eyes are very bright. I hope you are not coming down with a fever."
Christine laughed. "I have been at the vicarage, playing with the children", she explained. "Alexander wanted to play cricket, but after a few minutes it became clear that Marianne could not catch a ball and Robin could not hit one."
How do these people get published???
Go on, write a worse one, you know you want to....
2007-12-21 14:31:22 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
that is NOT bad. It's really common to start with dialogue.
*kt*
2007-12-21 14:35:41 · answer #1 · answered by katybop. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes,
I couldn't even pass English 101.
2007-12-21 14:35:46 · answer #2 · answered by ? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
daddy said my illigitimete saimese twins wheres mommy
2007-12-21 14:57:16 · answer #3 · answered by pickles 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
there's no place I'd rather be then right here, with my red neck, white socks and blue ribbon beer.
2007-12-21 14:43:27 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Her face had the looks of a drained toilet. (Flushed.)
2007-12-21 14:39:32 · answer #5 · answered by johN p. aka-Hey you. 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
your cheeks are three and your cracks are two, what in the heck?!?
2007-12-21 14:34:57 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋