ok, for my last novel, when the land has defeated the final villain, what would be a better ending for kids/teenagers? The leader has found another griffin (there were rumors the species had gone extinct) and they have a newborn griffin who becomes the future king. Or, sometimes people like it when a creature dies so should the leader die and leave his new son as king, or should it be a happy ending? If he dies he's go up to a heaven world where you live your second life. What's yuor thoughts about it, thx for ur opinions :)
2007-12-21 13:47:28 · 6 answers · asked by wintervalleygirl 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
well I already have a lot of twists for the ending, I dont think its boring but my warriors will end up kings and queens and end up living in the world of Arbelia. But they only end up living there is because kings and queens belong in this world and one family finally finds their missing parents, if u wanna know more just e mail me :)
2007-12-21 14:00:47 · update #1
For kids, I'd go for the happier ending
2007-12-21 13:50:42 · answer #1 · answered by aida 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Neither, pick something new and refreshing for once. How about making it a rather sad ending about the king doesn't come back? What would happen then if he dies and there is no one to take his place? Think about that and some other ideas and then you could make some twists to these rather boring endings.
2007-12-21 21:54:38 · answer #2 · answered by Tropical Kiwi 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
If you end it with the son becoming the new king, you could leave room for a second part of the story. If its a happy ending, it pretty much seems as if it ends there... I think both sound interesting, but it's up to you on how the story should go.
2007-12-21 21:51:47 · answer #3 · answered by littlekitty1985 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
a little tragic and a bit of happy ending would seem nice. think of what your readers would like to happen in the end.
2007-12-21 22:29:54 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your question is confusing and I have no idea what you are talking about. However, in general, I like stories or books that end with a bitter sweet touch. Good luck on finishing your book.
2007-12-21 21:52:44 · answer #5 · answered by blueeyes 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
None of it sounds remotely interesting!
Sounds dreadfully boring as a matter of fact!
Better luck next time?
Take it easy buddy!
2007-12-21 21:52:04 · answer #6 · answered by Lolita 5 · 1⤊ 2⤋