A small poem with a large meaning?

Question

Drum
Written by Semper Fi Reborn

This drum has no style.
It has a faulty rythm.
It's beat is off.
Timing has no synchronization.
It picked up it's sticks,
And left it's band hungry.
With no bass or snares to eat.
No cymbals clang for it.
It left a lot of hungry little drums,
With a stressed out Mommy drum.
What a deadbeat.

Smelly Feet, no it was not. My Father was in my life until his death. So was my Stepfather until his death. I am also a gret father and grandfather like the men before me. This poem is a wake up call to deadbeats!

Answer 1

Semper,take this poem and distribute it to every so-called man that has left his family,yet claims to be a man.This is deep,and right to the point.These words should rattle anyone to the core and serve as a wake-up call to all parents.

Answer 2

Sadly there are a lot of deadbeats Big daddy promises his girl friend the sun moon and stars and when the girl is pregnant big daddy is no where to be found. The reason there are so many stressed out mommy drums is the deadbeats don't want to marry having sex does not make a person a man being responsbile and accountable does. e4g

Answer 3

You have a sense of how the music is made by instruments, which is good, you add some knowledge
Since you say that it has a large meaning, it made me think of a Daddy which left a lot of hungry little drums( kids) and a stressed out Mommy.
I don't see why you add dot after 9 of 11 lines.

Answer 4

I hope a lot are reading this and realize s-x is not to be taken lightly.
The only TRUE way to prevent unwanted pregnancy is abstinence or having a procedure that makes you unable to be fruitful and multiply.
And there's no such thing as an "accident". Each child is meant to be, and are here for a reason. A child may be unplanned, but not accident.

My deepest apologies for not knowing a more polite way of explaining this.

Answer 5

Is it the drum or the drummer?

A "Rat ta tat" or a Boom boom" is the sound of sounds that a drummer makes, A sound created when its masters strokes.
A drum can not sound unless it's master chooses. Alone on a shelf, gathering dust, a drum is only a tool of the masters self.

Sam

Answer 6

oooohh that's really good :] but the 3 and 4 stanzas sound like a poem I've written before (not in a bad way)

Answer 7

I Really liked it Semper Fi it was cute and interesting ,

Answer 8

yes the poem's meaning is what u say.
i interpret it and see it as a poem full of regret and low energy. not that the person who wrote it is that. the poem gives a depressed and rejected feeling. the story behind it seems like something that happens much.

Answer 9

I'm just getting carried away with you,
and all the love you have given me.
I never understood what true love meant before,
but your love is so right for me,.
Lord it's you, You make our world seem so bright.

Answer 10

The kits are all different
The beats are alive
Tattoo percolates
From frantic hands

TD