To the beautiful woman who I truly love .... the most precious
Angel from the Heavens above ....
your tender soft lips .....
your pure gentle heart ....
your ever loving eyes ....
they tear me apart ....
with one magical kiss ....
from your sensuous lips ....
I start to get dizzy ....
you fill me with bliss ....
my love it grows stronger ....
for you every day ....
I know that you love me ....
it is ever so sweet ....
yes you are my Angel ....
you make me complete ....
jerry aka poet man ( to bad I do not even have a woman ) =(
2007-12-21 10:19:29 · 30 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
awwww, was tat for me this beautiful poem, or to the woman you do not yet have? any way it's beautiful! :)
2007-12-21 12:47:28 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
thats really good =] i write poetry too!
heres a piece of minee.
i stare into your eyes and i fall again
i fall in love by your countless wayss.
ohh the things you do to me
so miracously sweet.
my heart wildly flutters
with each single beat
your kiss over powers all my control
another defeat, another sin.
ohh the things you do to me.
its so incredibly amazing.
my heart is on fire with passion.
we sit still as its silently blazingg.
i just made that up =]
2007-12-21 18:29:47 · answer #2 · answered by Carmel Lee 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Well, this is nice for starters, but the REAL romantic poets (Lord Byron, for example) would not have written such facile rhyme. Of course, most of them were also suicidal and more than a little crazy, so there's your tradeoff... :)
2007-12-21 18:32:32 · answer #3 · answered by Mel 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
nice poem. check out www.poets.com they have new talent there.
Unfortunately the romantic poets passed back in the day with Emily Dickinson and Shakespeare.
2007-12-21 18:25:18 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice poem, man..seems your woman is here among the answers for your question.. Great that our women acknowledge poetic hearts..all the best!!
2007-12-22 04:44:31 · answer #5 · answered by Franc 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful!!! Lucky girl you dedicated this pretty poem. I'm a romantic poet... But not here, people are so cruel.
2007-12-21 18:22:30 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
You are one of a kind Jerry. Some woman is gonna be very lucky to find you!
2007-12-21 19:46:21 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
They left Yahoo Answer
2007-12-21 18:24:23 · answer #8 · answered by Yūsuke 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You are a beautiful poet. I could be your woman. tigers24740@yahoo.com im me. and weel tlk. hope 2 tlk 2 ya.
2007-12-21 18:22:52 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
YA, where have they all gone? The poem was great, I wish I had a guy that wrote like you do. Keep it up
MERRY CHRISTMAS
Laura
2007-12-21 18:23:45 · answer #10 · answered by laura seeks the Kwisatz Haderach 4 · 3⤊ 0⤋