i just wrote it real quick and second semester of school we have to write poetry so i might turn it in tell me waht you think of it:
Bloods&Crips
bloods and crips my brothers are not running from mothers but killin others. u know we used 2 be tight but now we in a gun fight cuz im red and u blue we used 2 be glue but now we not cuz they killed u
2007-12-21 07:40:20 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
it is okay i like the rhyme's in it
2007-12-21 08:24:48 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its alright but its very ghetto i always see poetry as music of the soul, but i definatly think this wud be more rap !
2007-12-21 15:44:04 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It stinks
2007-12-21 18:02:43 · answer #3 · answered by .45 Peacemaker 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋