what do you need to feel life poem?

Question

Living breathing feeling seeing smelling hearing touching thinking enjoing absorbing owening showing teaching telling giving closing opening starting knowing lying phornicting selling killing smoking drinking starving crying trying flying being and dying?

Answer 1

What do you need to feel life?
Living, breathing, feeling, seeing, smelling, hearing, touching, thinking, enjoing, absorbing, owning, showing, teaching, telling, giving, closing, opening, starting, knowing, lying, fornicating, selling, killing, smoking, drinking, starving, crying, trying, flying, being,
or just dying?

I think it's a good list poem but I've changed the last part so that it is not quite concluded as, with the previous one it seemed more like an answer to the question "what do you need to feel life?" where I think it would work better as an expansion of it.

You could also try it in this format, making the last part more prominent:

What do you need to feel life?

Living, breathing,
feeling, seeing,
smelling, hearing,
touching, thinking,
enjoing, absorbing,
owning, showing,
teaching, telling,
giving,

closing, opening,
starting, knowing,
lying, fornicating,
selling, killing,
smoking, drinking,
starving, crying,
trying, flying,
being...

or just dying?

Answer 2

something people can relate to. something that's obtainable an experience or event. something someone can touch with their mind. something that makes a person to be where the poet is describing.

Answer 3

wreck, all.
'xcept last.

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