2007-12-21 06:21:40 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
It is interesting that you wrote a poem with out words.
Is it musical? If you can find a way to post your musical form, I would very much like to hear it.
If the words are still captured in your feelings, thoughts and head, this is what I do to help bring them to paper.
I focus on just one image in my mind/feelings. That is the only thing I allow to flow within me at the time.
While it is there strong and bold, I blindly write upon the paper I hold.
From beginning to end this is what I do.
I focus on one thought until it is written down, then flow to the next.
After it is all on paper I review it. Are the feelings and emotions I felt , correctly portayed?
Review and rewrite keeping the meassage forever alive and truly protrayed.
I hope my suggestions are of some help.
Peace,
Sam
2007-12-21 07:16:01 · answer #1 · answered by Sam 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Dr. Seuss is perfect for inspiration for this poem! Just look at his book Hop On Pop!
2007-12-21 14:33:17 · answer #2 · answered by carol k 2 · 4⤊ 1⤋
Like I could do better than Jack - lol :)
I'm not really poetically inclined, although I love Dr. Seuss. I'm not sure if those are the types of words you are looking for though.
2007-12-21 14:29:59 · answer #3 · answered by Nea 5 · 4⤊ 1⤋
There once was a girl from Y! Answers
Who went and gave me the tight pantsers
I'd show her affection
With my huge erection
Cause this lust's killing me like a cancer..s...
OK I suck.
2007-12-21 15:17:55 · answer #4 · answered by Armless Joe, Bipedal Foe 6 · 8⤊ 1⤋
If I don't have the words, I usually use gestures.
I would surely get violated if I tried.
2007-12-21 14:29:49 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 6⤊ 0⤋
This lyrical frustration
and a bit of inebriation
causes bursts of poetic license
and mental masturbation
And it may not be wise
and it may not be just
that I lack the words to say
how much I long for you, and lust
Edit: I have a pretty good idea of who the thumbs down are from, and I know it's not you, Kit Kat. :-)
2007-12-21 14:27:08 · answer #6 · answered by Jack B, goodbye, Yahoo! 6 · 10⤊ 5⤋
use plenty of onomatopoeia...
like:
slap-slap-slap
squish
flub flub flub flub flub
spurt
2007-12-21 14:51:49 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 7⤊ 1⤋
speechless.
2007-12-21 23:47:12 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋