now that i have your attention, plz tell me what you think about this poem haha
At first glance faces are cold
Thoughts that enthuse are seldom told
The stares pierce souls like nails to fingertips
She is known, with one word thorugh the lips
A half smile but a crooked look
Who writes about feelings down in her book
Talk lightly twisting further the pen
As if you know her, where she's been
Guilty with a chew, first words turned you
Away from a friend, and resistant to glue
A tall tale while you chat till your full
Her hairs are split and nails dulled
Embarrassment in her face when the bell sounded
A rascal who tripped, her feet bounded
Who's to know the secrets that destroy
Her mind wound, kept like a toy
Unravel corruption till you hit the core
Who shall help the helpless off the floor
2007-12-19 08:50:48 · 8 answers · asked by John G 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
nice!
2007-12-19 08:54:31 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I write poems also and I think that is a really great poem. I would publish that poem if I were you. It sounds really great. Here are some of my poems:
Loneliness of a Whale
As I am walking along the shore of the dark blue sea,
I spot a whale.
I hear it crying for something that I am not aware of.
I think it is crying for help.
I then notice something coming toward me.
It was the whale.
I then was able to pet it. It seemed to enjoy it.
I think it wanted some company instead of help.
As I am petting the whale,
I then realize that the whale is like you and me.
It needs love.
A Nice Sunny Day on the Bay
It's a nice sunny day, so I decided to go lie on the bay.
I see birds flying high in the sky.
I here the cry of a crane echoing against the distant shore.
I feel and smell the fresh air blowing through as I lay there on the bay.
I feel the cool wet sand as I lay there on the bay.
I taste the fresh air as it blows through the sand near me.
...As it is still a nice, relaxing, sunny day.
2007-12-19 09:17:44 · answer #2 · answered by layanne1 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Paris Hilton is a human STD.
2016-05-25 01:56:52 · answer #3 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not really funny...
But interesting... I try to read it again
tomorrow... in the bright light of the day...
A glas of Champagne in my hand, a big cigar in
my big mouth and some music in the background...
May be Marylin Monroe... »I want to be loved by you...«
Stuff like this.. or her song about diamonds...
Aaron.
2007-12-19 08:54:24 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That poem is hot.
jk.
I was going with the paris hilton thing.
but your poem is amazing!
you should send it in to one of those poetry contests.
I write poetry too.
2007-12-19 08:54:03 · answer #5 · answered by xxcutielou 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Cool!
2007-12-19 09:44:05 · answer #6 · answered by cats 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its too late for me to think. very philosophical
2007-12-19 08:53:50 · answer #7 · answered by Jenny K 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
AWESOME YOU SHOULD TOTALLY MAKE A POEM BOOK!!!!
2007-12-19 08:54:43 · answer #8 · answered by mtrejo.1976 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋