At the end of the road
When I look back and gloat,
I see that nobody's beside me
And the world is looking funny.
At the top of the hill
I feel an insecure chill,
I know I hurt my old relations
Maddened with my cruel obsessions.
Now I feel an ecstasy!
My fantasy to conquer destiny:
It might be thrilling me
But its really killing me;
And even if I know it all
I cant stop my thirsty soul,
From truly making a hole
In my heart’s innocent wall.
Its not complete, but I’m still working on it. I'll be submitting the finished product on 23rd December, or maybe on Christmas Day.
2007-12-18 23:34:47 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
well its good, in a dark kinda way i hope though Real Life is more hopefull for you. but i wrote dark stuff when i was a teen i suppose if i wrote, i still might be dark. well i hope your thirst is quenched with eggnog. enjoy!
2007-12-18 23:46:25 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2007-12-18 23:42:38 · answer #2 · answered by sarah b 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It expresses human struggle within very well, Hope you post the finished product, good luck.
2007-12-19 00:10:05 · answer #3 · answered by jenny 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice i liked it ,,, when it is complete posted again plz
2007-12-18 23:43:01 · answer #4 · answered by jo n jo 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋