"Illegal Spying"
HEY KIDS!
Have you heard of illegal spying?
Did you say no?... you must be lying!
They want to see you laughing, crying...
If you speak certain ways of certain things
they'll probably want you to feel like dying.
and so-called Patriots Act this way?
Don't want me to ask "why?", about Iraq...
when every day we hear them counting bags
bags of bodies...human beings
don't act like I'm the only one seeing
don't act like I'm the only one freeing
freeing from chains
seeing with brains
we see insanity
powerful figures in vanity
don't get me wrong, some are o.k.
but things aren't!
Losing freedoms men and women die for
these are the things I cry for
2007-12-18 21:45:42 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Does someone want to give me their knowledge and tell me how much of it I can write?
Otherwise, shut up with that type of criticism. I'm not the one, putting the information out there, just rewording it.
2007-12-18 21:53:36 · update #1
... think i'm trying to deceive someone? What am I some kind of terrorist for asking questions?
2007-12-18 22:29:07 · update #2
tell me what you know, if it's so much more than me...then i'll be quiet
2007-12-18 22:30:35 · update #3
..or, not. But in a different way
2007-12-18 22:31:10 · update #4
Shakespeare is lying down near this wonderful poem... lol
2007-12-18 21:57:14 · answer #1 · answered by cheap cigarettes 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
If you're re-wording it and posting it then you're the one putting it out there. And your attempt to deceive us as to who and what you are is pretty lame. A lot of terrorists plots have been foiled because we're able to intercept emails and phone calls. The communistic ALCU is yanking your chain and makes it sound like the gov't is spying on every citizen when nothing can be farther from the truth. Grow up.
2007-12-18 22:08:18 · answer #2 · answered by Ken B 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
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2016-10-02 02:40:09 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
no it is not good at all, and your subject is not going to get you to the top of a list in terms of choice. If you write about war without any knowledge of it, it's like you teaching potty training to a baby if your a dog.
2007-12-18 21:50:32 · answer #4 · answered by John M 6 · 1⤊ 2⤋
A+. You are thinking like our founding fathers did. Well done..
2007-12-18 21:52:14 · answer #5 · answered by Bob Dylan ♪ 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
it feels more like a rap that jay-z would perform to kids rather than a poem...
but however you make it, it's still art... if you like it, then we like it too
2007-12-18 21:50:01 · answer #6 · answered by miLes 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It's okay, but it's no Francois Villon.
2007-12-18 21:49:23 · answer #7 · answered by bryan 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
OMGG its so good. so touching. comes from the heart. very well done!
2007-12-18 21:51:38 · answer #8 · answered by chantellie93 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
it's ok... but couldn't it include some hope?
2007-12-18 21:50:10 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
nice.
2007-12-18 21:48:30 · answer #10 · answered by steven e 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋