I would really like some characteristics of form
2007-12-18 11:30:50 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Classical
Here's more than you'd ever want to know about the madrigal:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Madrigal_(music) - good article
2007-12-18 11:38:56 · answer #1 · answered by Richard B 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Needs more cowbell! But really, I can't see anything I would recommend changing. The form is perfect and flows well, the language is fitting, the phrases don't sound forced. It was a pleasure to read. The one thing that you might consider changing, based on your taste, would be that "holy" appears twice in the first stanza. I don't think it has to be changed because it serves as an adjective in the first line, then a noun (Holy Grail) in the third.
2016-04-10 06:47:14 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋