A GUY MAKES A GIRL JEALOUS WHEN..............
he made her jealous
on purpose he tried.
When the girl asked, "Do you love me?"
on purpose he lied.
He played with jealousy
like it was a game.
Little did he know
Things would never be the same.
His plan was working
but he had no clue.
How wrong things would go,
the damage he would do.
One night she broke down,
feeling very
alone.
Just her and the blade,
no one else home.
She dialed his number
he answered, "Hello"
She told him she loved him
and hung up the phone.
He raced to her
house
just a minute too late.
Found her lying in blood,
her heart had no rate.
Beside her was a note,
in it her confession.
Her love for this boy,
her only obsession.
As he read the note,
he knelt down and cried.
Grabbed her knife,
that night they both died.
She was found in his arms
both of them dead.
Under her
note
his handwriting said:
"I loved her
so, she never knew.
All this time
I loved her
too."
*sobs quietly*
2007-12-16 07:05:07 · 44 answers · asked by ☮NeonZebra♥ 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Singles & Dating
wow..as much as i HATE emo poetry..this one is weirdly kinda good.
2007-12-16 07:08:35 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
I don't mean to be hurtful, but I find it slightly narcissistic. I think the boy doesn't want the sole responsibility for making another happy. I think he would rather have someone bright and full of love for life that he would be able to soak up just by being near her. And I certainly don't think he would take his own life, rather I think he would be extremely angry at her. Especially because she would be trying to pin her selfish act on him. Life is not something you should just toss away just to make a point. It should be used to transform your soul, each day dedicated to becoming a better person. Instead of thinking of death, exercise. Often by healing the body, we can heal the mind.
2007-12-16 07:17:11 · answer #2 · answered by tizzlegrrrl 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very sad! Sounds like a modern Romeo and Juliet.
2007-12-16 07:08:55 · answer #3 · answered by KyLoveChick 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It doesn't make me cry, but it does make me sad. And scared because I don't want to be like that. I picture an emo girl lying in some preppy guy's arms...
2007-12-16 07:10:41 · answer #4 · answered by dazedandconfused 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No tears but IT IS kind of heavy. I loved this poem. It's short & right on.
No one should play games in emotional related things. Cuz if one truly loves, they wouldn't like the game to go on them the other way round.
But hey, how many guys kill themselves for us, the girls... :D :D ,, so like... uuh.. PLEASE.
Nothing deserves to kill oneself for.
Life has a lot a lot more to run for & it goes on.
Thank you for sharing.
2007-12-16 07:13:31 · answer #5 · answered by HeavenYoura 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is sad, if you look into it more deeply. It just shows you how much damage playing games and dishonesty can do.
2007-12-16 07:12:09 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
probably make a teen age drama queen cry or someone who is already depressed.
is this an email spam/chain letter?
it started to put me asleep.
2007-12-16 07:10:46 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Now I've got a knot in my stomach! But better than a knife!
2007-12-16 07:09:04 · answer #8 · answered by Lover of Blue 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No I see this on Myspace all the time on bullentins.
2007-12-16 07:15:41 · answer #9 · answered by Maiden Head 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I truly hope that's not how you are feeling. Remember "the sun always rises again"
2007-12-16 07:09:14 · answer #10 · answered by Jaco W 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋