Can some one help me with this sonnet
it is suppose to be traditional with and octet and a sestet
an iambic pentameter
Which i have trouble with. If you can read it and tell me wether i have 5 iambs on each line and help me with the ones i don't
Please
Out on the field
the wistle blew loud
cleats came aimed at my shins i had sheilds
and with the ball at my feet i plowed
i knocked the ball far wide
up to the six yard box i flew
a slotted ball center drew my slide
my foot hit the ball right on que
in the back of the net drawing cheers and boos
back to the center went the ball
the other team was now feeling blue
a sudden break away was a close call
but with forty minutes up the wistle blew
we won the game like every team intends to
2007-12-15 11:39:43 · 2 answers · asked by Hippo<3Looopppeerrr 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Jokes & Riddles
wrong catagory.
2007-12-15 12:00:33 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
the poem sounds good. I am not sure if this helps, but here is a link.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Iamb
http://www.m-w.com/cgi-bin/dictionary?book=Dictionary&va=iambs
2007-12-16 02:49:00 · answer #2 · answered by Ginnykitty 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋