Can You Check This For Speling, Puncutation, Similes, Idioms, Metaphors, Hyperbloes, Alliterations, Repitions?

Question

is trying to get out the passenger’s side of the car. I see the Martin-Thing, The head is extremely like a geckos head but with two large antennas on the top of it’s skull, the neck had two gills, what would look like a cape dracula would wear, but it is the same color as the Martin-Things skin, the back is covered in hundreds of slimy scales, the fetid smell is coming from it’s back, and the legs are long and they look like crabs legs, since they are position so far away from the back. Quickly, I run the car, almost tripping over my shoe laces, to open the driver’s side door, and notice...The door is locked, that meant , the only way to get into the car is on the passenger’s side! So, I run around the car, and open the door, the Martin-Thing jumps towards me, and remembering what Shawn told me,“if a creature, ever attacks you, you should throw water on it” So, I grab the water bottle, and before I could grab the water bottle, The Martin-Thing knocks me down, and Shawn flew in

Answer 1

I have checked the spelling, Punctuation, Similes, Repetitions.

When I was trying to get in to the passenger’s side of the car, I saw the Martin-Thing. Its head is extremely like a geckos head but with two large antennas on the top of its skull. Its neck had two gills, what would look like a cape Dracula would wear, but it is the same color as the Martin-Things skin. It’s back is covered in hundreds of slimy scales. The fetid smell is coming from it’s back, and the legs are long and they look like crab’s legs, since they are positioned so far away from the back. Quickly, I ran around the car, almost tripping over my shoelaces, to open the driver side door, and noticed that the door is locked. That means the only way to get into the car is from the passenger side! When I went back again and opened the door, the Martin-Thing jumped towards me. I remembered what Shawn has told me, “if a creature, ever attacks you, you should throw water on it”. So, I tried to grab my water bottle. But before I could grab it, The Martin-Thing knocked me down, and Shawn flew in.

Is this OK??

Answer 2

I’m trying to get out the passenger’s side of the car. I see the Martin-Thing; the head is extremely like a geckos head but with two large antennas on the top of its skull, the neck has two gills. That look like a cape Dracula would wear, but it’s the same color as the Martin-Things skin, the back is covered in hundreds of slimy scales, the fetid smell is coming from its back, and the legs are long and they look like crabs legs, since they are position so far away from the back. Quickly, I run the car, almost tripping over my shoe laces, to open the driver’s side door, and notice...The door is locked, that meant , the only way to get into the car is on the passenger’s side! So, I run around the car, and open the door, the Martin-Thing jumps towards me, and remembering what Shawn told me,” if a creature, ever attacks you, you should throw water on it” So, I grab the water bottle, and before I could grab the water bottle, The Martin-Thing knocks me down, and Shawn flew in

Answer 3

to begin with : in your first line, it is speLLing, not speling. The rest seems so boring. Well, you did ask.

Answer 4

It is all pretty bad. Poor punctuation, wrong verb tenses, missing capitalisation ........ shall I go on?

Mind you, if you are 8, it is pretty good.

Answer 5

what in the world is rong with you 4 writing that !!! you got probloms !!!!

Answer 6

you should do your own work.