I went to a party,
And remembered what you said.
You told me not to drink, Mom,
so I had a sprite instead.
I felt proud of myself,
The way you said I would,
that I didn't drink and drive,
though some friends said I should.
I made a health y choice,
And your advice to me was right.
The party finally ended,
and the kids drove out of sight.
I got into my car,
Sure to get home in one piece.
I never knew what was coming, Mom,
something I expected least.
Now I'm lying on the pavement,
And I hear the policeman say,
the kid that caused this wreck was drunk,
Mom, his voice seems far away.
My own blood's all around me,
As I try hard not to cry.
I can hear the paramedic say,
this girl is going to die.
I'm sure the guy had no idea,
While he was flying high.
Because he chose to drink and drive,
now I would have to die.
So why do people do it, Mom
Knowing that it ruins lives?
And now the pain is cutting me,
like a hundred stabbing knives.
Tell sister not to be afraid, Mom
Tell daddy to be brave.
And when I go to heaven,
put " Mommy's Girl" on my grave.
Someone should have taught him,
That it's wrong to drink and drive.
Maybe if his parents had,
I'd still be alive.
My breath is getting shorter,
Mom I'm getting really scared
These are my final moments,
and I'm so unprepared.
I wish that you could hold me Mom,
As I lie here and die.
I wish that I could say, "I love you, Mom!"
So I love you and goodbye.
2007-12-12 00:00:37 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Family & Relationships ➔ Family
wow i've heard that poem before its so sad, and beautiful, hopefully ppl who like to drink will read this poem, and they will ge tthe message, but it shows how someone else's mistake can hurt soooo many ppl, so think before you do something you may regret.
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2007-12-15 03:17:29 · answer #1 · answered by cursed_cutiepi 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Oh my gosh!.The poem is very deep and touchy,sad and cruel at the same time.However, life is in that way and someone has to reflect with words the reality of this crazy world when some people take life as a simple joke.Well done, kiddo.
2007-12-12 10:45:03 · answer #2 · answered by Mario Vinny D 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its a very sad and heart-breaking poem. At the same time its beautiful. Very realistic and true, coming from that point of view.
2007-12-12 09:17:43 · answer #3 · answered by Rachel 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow...That poem was amazing.That was really deep.You can actually stop someone from drinking and driving by showing them this poem.Thats really good.
Youre really talented.
2007-12-13 02:10:53 · answer #4 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
omg :'( i actully cried abit it really touched my heart
thats very sad....sure did convince me not the drink and drive
2007-12-12 16:35:00 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very sad poem! But its lovely... Did you write it yourself?
2007-12-12 08:11:30 · answer #6 · answered by POP 1 · 1⤊ 1⤋
its soo sad... but like the others think i know you didnt write that
2007-12-12 17:33:35 · answer #7 · answered by going [[nowhere]] fast 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow very sad
2007-12-15 19:44:00 · answer #8 · answered by Sheila 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
omg that is sooooooooooo good i wish i hade your talent
2007-12-12 17:04:57 · answer #9 · answered by jackie 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very nice your talented.
2007-12-12 18:58:37 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋